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His Front Wheels Were Rolling Backwards

A car, I seen on the highway... was moving kind of slow His front wheels... Were rolling backwards Because, the truck behind him.... Was giving him a tow Dial it back Poetry Contest Sponsored by Maureen McGreavy 5-15-2019

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Panagiota Romios

Date: 5/26/2019 1:51:00 AM

Good luck. Panagiota

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 5/20/2019 8:39:00 PM

G'day charles ... you stated the obvious though you still got me - thanks charles - Lindsay

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 5/20/2019 1:13:00 PM

A fun poem Charles and a definite win - a clever ending with a twist! Hugs, Jennifer.

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 5/20/2019 12:38:00 PM

Fine penning Charles,with interesting fun finale!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/16/2019 3:13:00 PM

really cool with a fun surprise in the end, charles...thanks for the giggles!...huggs

Kurt Ravidas

Date: 5/16/2019 3:10:00 PM

Ha, it's nice! It took me a while to get the point. Post-post-modern)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 5/16/2019 5:34:00 AM

Haha I was thinking all sorts till I got to.the end. Good luck Charlie. Tom.

Panagiota Romios

Date: 5/16/2019 1:57:00 AM

Very groovy! Panagiota

Lawrence Sharp

Date: 5/15/2019 11:28:00 PM

Hahaha... a very creative take on the theme; well done, my friend.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 5/15/2019 11:20:00 PM

Charles, when you hear "dial it back" you truly do understand what it means. BRAVO!