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Unknown are the reasons as to why, why you belong in my unknown Somehow you do, do you feel it somehow? Hidden somewhere deep inside inside where emotions stay hidden ------------ hidden are secrets and love love and secrets are hidden ------------- Beyond space, the stars, poetry in this place sun, moon and charcoal clouds- colorful ink . . deep within the soul . . you remain Still unsure the reason why, depth takes shape as I place this in poetry, the stars, space beyond Do you feel it somehow? somehow you do You belong in my unknown
___________________ ~ Just a little scribble ~ 2/7/2019 Submitted to Standard Contest 570 Sponsor- Brian Strand Placed first: Contest #570 by Brian Strand

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Date: 3/12/2019 7:12:00 PM
I love the circular quality of this delightful poem, Brandy. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 3/12/2019 9:11:00 PM
Thank you Line. Your kind words and congratulations are appreciated. ~ Brandy
Date: 3/7/2019 5:07:00 PM
Congratulations on your awesome win.Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 3/7/2019 8:00:00 PM
Thank you Eve. Your thoughts are appreciated. ~ Brandy
Date: 3/6/2019 1:38:00 PM
Congrats my sweet friend, your beautiful thoughts deserve this acknowledgement. All my best. John
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Date: 3/6/2019 5:16:00 PM
Thank you John. Such a wonderful thing to say. You and your thoughts are appreciated. My best to you. ~ Brandy
Date: 3/6/2019 10:37:00 AM
Congrats. SK
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Date: 3/6/2019 1:27:00 PM
Thank you Sara. Your thoughts are appreciated. ~ Brandy
Date: 3/6/2019 10:23:00 AM
Back with BIG congrats Brandy.. on your well deserved first place win in Brian's contest.
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Date: 3/6/2019 1:21:00 PM
Soft sigh!! Thank you Vijay. Such a wonderful surprise. Not sure why I placed this poem in a contest. I just decided to. These words hold meaning and depth. I appreciate your kindness and your congratulations. ~ Brandy
Date: 2/13/2019 11:13:00 PM
Wow Brandy sometimes me and your are in the same place it feels good to be there with you. Were so close yet so far away! Beautiful write my friend:)
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Date: 2/14/2019 11:42:00 AM
Thank you Mike!! Your thoughts are so sweet and they bring a smile. Such a wonderful thing to say. I appreciate you and your kindness. :) Brandy
Date: 2/12/2019 10:11:00 PM
The unknown can be a scary place at times, we are all anxious to see what lies ahead. Keeping the faith is the best remedy. Very nice, Brandy.
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Date: 2/12/2019 10:21:00 PM
Yes, I agree Charlie. Keeping the Faith and eyes wide open, is a very good thing. I appreciate you and your thoughts. My best to you. ~ Brandy
Date: 2/12/2019 9:54:00 AM
The unknown known behind curtains...love takes many shapes and meanings...impossible to tell but possible to feel....Nice write Brandy
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Date: 2/12/2019 7:05:00 PM
:) Love the way your thoughts move here. There is a rhythmic flow indeed. Thank you Arturo for your kind words. I am smiling. ~ Brandy
Date: 2/12/2019 8:13:00 AM
Sometimes the unknown can be quite scary. Having a friend to just be there with you in those times can make all the difference in the world.
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Date: 2/12/2019 7:04:00 PM
True!! It is amazing how someone can be there with you- in the unknown. Distance cannot separate the reasons why. You and your thoughts are appreciated. Good to have you back Lyric Man. ~ Brandy
Date: 2/12/2019 4:40:00 AM
"You belong in my unknown" - loved it.. :)
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Date: 2/12/2019 6:54:00 PM
:) Thank you Swetha. I appreciate your thoughts. ~ Brandy
Date: 2/11/2019 1:29:00 PM
the touch of alchemy ignites the much -needed thrill to be subtle... beautiful, brandy!..huggs
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Date: 2/11/2019 8:45:00 PM
Thank you nette. :) I appreciate you and your thoughts. The unknown can be very mysterious. Waking all the senses. ~ Brandy
Date: 2/9/2019 9:19:00 PM
Deep emotions stored away in the "unknown" and "beyond the stars".. Very nicely written Brandy..
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Date: 2/9/2019 9:55:00 PM
Thank you Joseph. Sometimes emotions touch the stars, beyond the unknown. Your thoughts are appreciated. :) Brandy
Date: 2/9/2019 5:30:00 AM
Love is a mystery that in order not to lose its magic better it is hidden to remain! Excellent poem dearest, Nicole!
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Date: 2/9/2019 1:25:00 PM
In order to be found, what is hidden becomes visible. Magical indeed, when this happens. Thank you Demetrios. Your thoughts are appreciated. ~ Brandy
Date: 2/9/2019 12:44:00 AM
A lovely warm colorful peom of an unsure, love, yet a feeling of deep involvement with it! Great write, Poetry hugs, Jennifer.
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Date: 2/9/2019 1:15:00 PM
Sometimes in moments unknown, the heart does feel a tender tug. Thank you Jennifer. I appreciate you and your thoughts. ~ Brandy
Date: 2/8/2019 10:11:00 AM
The unknown often seems to be the best thing we can find, or not find. As always, very warm and charming.
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Date: 2/8/2019 1:52:00 PM
Exactly!! The unknown can be exciting, in some ways. The best thing to find, when it is made known. Your thoughts are appreciated. Thank you Lawrence. :) Brandy
Date: 2/8/2019 7:30:00 AM
Fantastic wordplay ...a charming display of playful emotions..an invitation to the unknown..to feel. Well written, Brandy.
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Date: 2/8/2019 1:44:00 PM
Thank you Vijay. These words are from the heart. The rhyming pattern flowed so easily. Your thoughts are always appreciated. ~ Brandy
Date: 2/8/2019 7:02:00 AM
To be known is a privilege and as I read your poetry you become better known. Very good poem.
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Date: 2/8/2019 1:32:00 PM
Thank you Gerald. Such a wonderful thing to say, about me and my poetry. I appreciate your kind words. :) Brandy
Date: 2/8/2019 6:52:00 AM
First three couplets are really very well written,this is a really good poem.
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Date: 2/8/2019 1:31:00 PM
Thank you Kedar. Your thoughts bring a smile. I appreciate you reading this little scribble of mine. :) Brandy
Date: 2/8/2019 4:19:00 AM
Beautiful scribble, Brandy, a soft tender longing. I love the clever way you formed the first four couplets. All my best. John
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Date: 2/8/2019 1:20:00 PM
Thank you John. There is a certain flow to these words. It does hold a touch of longing. Your thoughts are appreciated. My best to you. ~ Brandy
Date: 2/8/2019 12:59:00 AM
In this world we are often attracted to someone without know him. But love is more than just liking a person. So well expressed, Brandy.
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Date: 2/8/2019 1:11:00 PM
Thank you Victor. It is possible to feel the heart of another- even if through the wind. Your thoughts say so much. I appreciate you and your kindness. ~ Brandy
Date: 2/7/2019 10:06:00 PM
A beautiful, inviting, poem. I am sure someone is immensely pleased!
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Date: 2/7/2019 10:40:00 PM
Thank you Caren. Your thoughts are appreciated. :) Brandy