Haiku - 12

water still and clear lying lifeless in my eyes - dust from fallen star written 20180814

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Date: 10/1/2021 11:27:00 AM

Beautiful wisdom

Francis J Grasso
Date: 10/6/2021 8:12:00 AM

Thank you, P.M. Happy you enjoyed this. ...Fran

Date: 4/16/2020 12:45:00 AM

Teardrops that hold on Warm as a dying ember As I watch you go. A Haiku inspired by reading this beautiful Haiku.

Francis J Grasso
Date: 4/16/2020 8:18:00 AM

A lovely compliment, JCB. Thank you. ...Fran

Date: 9/18/2019 6:03:00 PM

So very sad yet so beautiful Fran.

Date: 9/18/2018 9:53:00 PM

Great haiku imagery, Francis

Francis J Grasso
Date: 9/21/2018 12:11:00 PM

Thank you, Warren. ...Fran

Date: 8/15/2018 8:01:00 AM

wonderful image full of melancholy. Lovely haiku . soup mail

Francis J Grasso
Date: 8/15/2018 9:49:00 AM

Thanks, Agnes and thank you again for the heads up. ...Fran

Date: 8/14/2018 2:37:00 PM

water and tears make a great combination of symbols, francis... fabulous 'ku from your golden pen..huggs

Francis J Grasso
Date: 8/15/2018 9:50:00 AM

Thank you, nette. ...Fran

Date: 8/14/2018 7:59:00 AM

Gorgeous, with a hint of longing.

Francis J Grasso
Date: 8/15/2018 6:49:00 AM

Thank you, Maureen... Fran