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Here, As the Dark City Glistens

Here, as the dark city glistens Here, as the dark city glistens, rain pelts unsuspecting sidewalks, filling cracks and running gutters Disguising stoic potholes in black, snickering as they wait silently to startle the next drowsy driver to pass by Neon reflects in puddles of discontent while high rise lights flicker in kitchens above where cold water seems to be the answer as groggy eyes fiddle with leftover decisions making more noise than can be heard 3 am, desolate, just a few cats rummage in alleys for unsuspecting rats and other rodents who have sold their dreams for a temporary high, plastic bag desires that come morning will seek its revenge and hands will be out promising redemption, counting brown leather wing tips and Prada heels I stop at the old library slated for demolition, tracing the lopsided heart with our initials I carved into the brick as you kept a look out so we wouldn’t get caught Laughing at the dust that gathered on my shoes, Telling me it would be forever not the dust, us, we weren’t Lonely is a state of mind for those who wander these concrete caverns, unable to sleep Finding opened eyed nightmares resemble those that they now run from, hoping the next corner holds the key to the past when nights were spent under warm covers, in soft arms, not walking alone, not dying, not here, as the dark city glistens

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Date: 1/10/2017 10:46:00 AM
I agree w/Sunlite Wanter, a very deep poem, Chris. It makes the reader ponder the existential questions of reality. A sharply written poem w/cutting edge emotions detached and discarded in a dark alley, which someone finds and is overjoyed. One person's trash is another person's treasure. Keep that glistening pen pointed at our hearts w/brilliant poetry like this. Loved this offering. Great poetic art. Love and peace to you.
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Chris Green
Date: 1/10/2017 11:54:00 AM
Thanks again Freddie for always leaving wonderful comments on my poetry. I am so thrilled you liked this one
Date: 1/10/2017 12:36:00 AM
Very familiar image for me :) This time! Nothing is forever, is it... Very lively poem, this one, so much in there.
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Chris Green
Date: 1/10/2017 8:43:00 AM
Thanks so much for reading and commenting Darren.
Date: 1/9/2017 6:40:00 PM
I've been down a few alleys in my day:) Awakened by many a pothole too. The only difference was, I always had a sidekick
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Chris Green
Date: 1/10/2017 8:43:00 AM
Thanks so much Daniel. I appreciate your coming by and leaving a comment on my poem. A sidekick does make it much better.
Date: 1/9/2017 6:40:00 PM
Chris, that's very heavy - especially the last verse.
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Chris Green
Date: 1/10/2017 8:42:00 AM
Thanks so much Sunlite. I get heavy every once in a while. : )
Date: 1/9/2017 3:57:00 PM
The story you wove in this beautiful poem should end up as a romantic film. I saw it all so vividly and felt it all so deeply. Excellent poem, Chris. Your poetry always takes my breath away.
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Chris Green
Date: 1/9/2017 4:29:00 PM
Wow Christy, what a nice thing to say to me. I truly appreciate your kindness. I am thrilled you liked this one.
Date: 1/9/2017 3:21:00 PM
I think I bent a few rims in those potholes back in the day riding around with the top down in my old mustang hanging out with those cool cats.
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Chris Green
Date: 1/9/2017 4:28:00 PM
They are very sneaky those damn potholes...just lying in wait, I can almost hear them laughing as another rim is destroyed. :) Thanks so much my friend.
Date: 1/9/2017 2:57:00 PM
This poem transmits a sad and lonely Winter feeling, a nostalgic feeling of better days too, days when nights werent sleepless and were warmer. This poem touches the soft spot of the heart Chris.
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Chris Green
Date: 1/9/2017 4:27:00 PM
Thank you so very much Charmaine, sometimes the nights do feel like this but fortunately there is always the next morning when hope opens its eyes and a new day starts again.

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