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Her Gentle Body

. Tenderly like a whisper like words softly approaching mine ear her gentle body receptive ‘gainst mine

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 8/26/2015 4:01:00 PM
straight to the point, nice .
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James Peranteau
Date: 6/3/2021 1:49:00 AM
*winks
Date: 4/19/2015 11:22:00 AM
Agreed with Nette....am on soup for inspiration on this dreary Minnesota day, James....this beauty is so amazingly simple in its pureness....a stunningly wonderful poem from a talented poet and good triend, love,(to mine faves!) jimbo
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Date: 4/19/2015 10:51:00 AM
hauntingly beautiful expressions, james... so implicitly defined..i go wow!.. huggs
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Date: 4/19/2015 9:58:00 AM
Lovely, passionate write James ;) hope you and your son is doing good and that the weekend is a fabulous one my friend ;)
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Date: 4/19/2015 2:15:00 AM
Now that moment is something to write about surely. This is tender and passionate. You always know how to put the reader into the piece. That is one thing out of the many things I admire in your work... you've got a distinctive style that is both intriguing and memorable. Always, Laura
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Date: 4/18/2015 6:21:00 PM
PS............ I love the tenderness of her gentle body. One can visualize so much, in such little lines. The imagery is sensual, I love it. LINDA
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Date: 4/18/2015 6:18:00 PM
I am not going to enter my contest James, I had no PM, I had my lovely sister post the contest for me. :) Thank you for enjoying my poem... LINDA
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Date: 4/18/2015 9:16:00 AM
This is perfect!
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Date: 4/18/2015 7:22:00 AM
oooh what a sensual write James - so few words say so much - a 7 from me:-) Hugs Jan xx
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James Peranteau
Date: 6/3/2021 1:47:00 AM
Belated ty dear poet

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