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Heaven's Justice

He stood so shocked at Heaven’s door Not by its splendor nor its décor But by those already in Folks who had many a sin Pick pockets, prostitutes, rogues and more

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Date: 5/30/2022 8:05:00 AM
Sinners enter Heaven before those who think they are great. Thanks for reading my poem on the Casino,
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Date: 5/29/2022 1:33:00 AM
Lol, it's not what you know but who you know. Good one Valsa. Tom
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Date: 5/28/2022 11:46:00 PM
Wisdom in a Limbrick, Valsa. I like it. Smiles ~ Blessings, Bill
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Date: 5/28/2022 8:35:00 PM
Saint Peter's palm gets greased? Aloha!
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Date: 5/28/2022 8:19:00 AM
Valsa, this limerick is really clever and funny. I'll bet that he was bemoaning the days on earth when he was a devout believer and worshiper, while others were having fun and making the most of their lives.
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