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Heaven Through the Eyes - - a Collab With Olive E, Guillermo

HEAVEN THROUGH THE EYES Won't you tell me places called heaven on earth? for so long, so long, I tried to search and search Come east. Come west. North to south, I all reach. my quest began since day of my birth. . . It's pre-historic palaeolithic age, this beautiful place Karnataka's architecture amidst it's greenery. Heaven through my eyes seeing such scenery to walk it's ground my thoughts gently grace. Meandering many miles from a dripping spring, the Fraser River in it's glory catches my eye, heaven through my eyes as I stand nearby to hear it's lapping waters as it sings. This magnificent fissure, one of earth's abyss, the Grand Canyon on the Colorado Plateau. Heaven through my eyes, in erosion flow resided the ancient Pueblo whom lived in bliss. Supple strong arms cradle me from harm Salty tears they slowly fall, to flood cracking gradually sadness that long clog Heaven reveal to my eyes your charm behold thee not by a necklace of glitter but a love so peaceful and oh so tender that 'til this life is through I'll remember no longer do I want ever be shut! as all these infuse in me reasons to smile and again take a look at yellow horizons with it's curly shaped clouds white and some blue Heaven is revealed to my eyes by the presence of you! Evergreen leaves so lush cluster among trees Daisies, magnolias, orchids they paint a beauty Ocean blue touch the sea's face of purity Heaven through my eyes displayed for free! Beyond this life, beyond this whole wide world-- do you believe a place called heaven up there? If you do, won't you tell me a clue to exactly know where and what to do for so long, so long there I like to curl? © O. E. Guillermo and J. A. Fraser .1.00 pm, December 26, 2014

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Date: 1/6/2015 2:09:00 AM
Thanks James for writing this with me.. :)! mmmmmn let's see what's next... :)! and what form.. :P :D?????!!! maybe we try some strings of short poems.. :)!!! with an illustration.. :D?.........olive eloisa
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James Fraser
Date: 1/7/2015 5:44:00 AM
Fun filled it was as always Olive. Indeed, string of short poems to whatever form, theme shall be next. Yea, with an illustration also........James ;) X :)
Date: 1/4/2015 5:25:00 PM
You two write such incredible poems James sublime imagery - congrats on yet another wonderful collaboration James an Olive its a 7 from me:-) hugs jan xx
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Jan Allison
Date: 1/5/2015 1:54:00 PM
thats what makes collaborating so exciting James:-) Hugs jan xxx
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James Fraser
Date: 1/5/2015 1:51:00 PM
Firstly, Happy New Year to you and yours xx - Thank you Jan, she's quite the Poet is Olive. I love the way she uses words that are totally outside the box <*> Have a blessed healthy 2015, James xx

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