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Heaven Smiles On Love's Own Shore - Valentine's Collection

(Valentine's Collection) 15. A,B,C,D, - E. Sonnet. Oh, my beloved, we open love's door, with smiling heart we walk into the light. My heart is touched by your beautiful grace, time now to enter a Valentine dream. Now we do stand at the edge of love's shore, under the spotlight that Luna shines bright. Love it shines now upon your golden face, you stand in my arms, a beauty supreme. Oh, my beloved, you whom I adore, we share our desires within joy's delight. I feel deep peace within your warm embrace, soon we shall go to love's own starlight stream. Within the starlight your eyes ever shine, by starlight stream, we lie, my Valentine. 18/01/2019. Rhyming Scheme: A,B,C,D. A,B,C,D. A,B,C,D, EE

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Silent One

Date: 1/19/2019 8:22:00 AM

Another romantic poem, full of romantic lines... I have not seen a rhyme scheme like this in a sonnet before, but it reads very well..

Vladislav Raven
Date: 1/19/2019 9:51:00 AM

Hi Silent, thank you for dropping by and the comment on this Sonnet, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked the piece. I don't know where this rhyme scheme came from. I can't remember where I saw it. The heart is still singing and the collection goes on. Have a wonderful saturday. Your friend always....Mike.

Sunlite Wanter

Date: 1/18/2019 6:41:00 PM

So loving. Bet you were thinking about someone to write it.

Vladislav Raven
Date: 1/19/2019 9:31:00 AM

Hi Sunlite, thank you for dropping by and the comment on this piece, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked the piece. Maybe I was thinking of someone when I was writing this piece. Sometimes I am not sure, I just let my heart sing. This collection is for anyone. Have a wonderful Saturday. Hugs....Mike. XX

Vladislav Raven

Date: 1/18/2019 5:38:00 PM

I would like to thank all those who drop by to view this piece. Your visits help a poet to keep singing. have a wonderful Friday. Hugs....Mike. XX

Vladislav Raven
Date: 1/19/2019 7:56:00 AM

Hi Charles, thank you for dropping by and the comment, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you are enjoying the writes. How can one have a Valentine's Collection without the Sonnet? Shall be dropping by again Charles. Have a wonderful Saturday....Mike.

Charles Messina
Date: 1/18/2019 10:09:00 PM

Great job with your Valentine collection, Mike. I have read a few of them and they are awesome! Have a great Saturday and thanks again for your visit...Charlie