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Heaven In The Morning

Heaven In The Morning Waking to the dawns  pattern of lace Lovingly laid there  upon your face How the light and the  dark did dance Mesmorizing me into  a deep trance Even its beauty paled   compared to you Smiling i think your my  dream come true When your eyes opened  oh so slow Gorgeous eyes always  holding a glow Touching your face, you  made me calm Turning my hand over  you kiss my palm A beautiful simplicity  just felt so right Even the sun seemed to  shine  more bright Leaning forward you  whisper in my ear Heaven this morning  as you pull me near

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Date: 3/18/2019 11:53:00 PM
Now that's love!!
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 3/19/2019 3:46:00 AM
ok actually thats an imagination lol! I guess I have a romantic now! Lol thanks curtis! Hugs Brenda
Date: 3/17/2019 2:53:00 PM
Ahhhh, she returns -- the queen of the couplet! As always your couplets skip along in the most delightful rhyming way...I think you are at your most happiest when composing in this manner -- and it shows! Enjoyed!! Holding you in my thoughts tonight, Brenda.. :) john
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 3/18/2019 7:28:00 AM
Lol thank you John and as always you are too kind! Couplets are so easy if I could just master something else ! Brenda
Date: 3/15/2019 11:32:00 AM
Nice Gamma but still YUCK! Heehee!
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 3/18/2019 7:27:00 AM
What you mean little girl yuck? Lmao! Go take care of your baby sister! Love ya
Date: 3/14/2019 9:22:00 AM
Beautifully written. :)
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 3/18/2019 7:26:00 AM
Thank you Heidi for your kindness! Brenda
Date: 3/14/2019 7:09:00 AM
Absolutely beautiful. You forgot to put "Good Morning Soupers" at the bottom. This is one of the best good morning poems I have read. : )
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 3/18/2019 7:24:00 AM
I didn't write good morning suppers because I'm not that writer Chris! Everyone awaits your good mornings you do it so well! Thank you for stopping by!;) Brenda
Date: 3/14/2019 6:43:00 AM
celestial bliss pure poetry Regards,ElsARoseee
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 3/18/2019 7:23:00 AM
Elsa thank you for your comment and the read! Brenda