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Hearts Cast To the Sand

Emotions blaring silently within, Recall days with emptiness, pretending. Romantic whispers smothered amid sin. Fantastic fantasies fight the ending. Hand in hand true loves gathering seashells Sharing, exploring, we, embracing smiles. Knowing not what fate the future foretells. Loving blue eyes, soon, one true heart beguiles. Oblivious: no worry, no torture nor hate. Just stormy silence each breath fully grand. Moonlight comes shining loves endless state. Passion’s heat blazes, casts hearts to the sand. Steamy summer love one dreamy night Married forever, true love takes flight. © July 15, 2010

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Earle Brown

Date: 7/24/2010 7:18:00 PM

Lovely write. Congrats!

Tirzah Conway

Date: 7/20/2010 8:20:00 PM

Congrat's Dane Ann on your wonderful win! Enjoy your victory!~Tirzah~

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/19/2010 7:24:00 AM

Congratulations Dane Ann on your well deserved win in A Rambling Poet's contest "Steamy Summer Love". Love, Carol

Kelly Zakerski

Date: 7/19/2010 3:27:00 AM

CONGRATULATIONS on your 1st place win. This is awesome! Luv Kelly

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/18/2010 7:52:00 PM

I remember this sweet one from last night. A big congratulations to you,Dane ann. LUv, andrea

Audrey Haick

Date: 7/18/2010 11:50:00 AM

Warmest congratulations to you Dane Ann on this beautiful Sonnet! Definitely goes to my favs. so I may read it again! Love it! Love, Audrey Hope you're doing well!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/18/2010 8:48:00 AM

Congrats Dane Ann on your first place win with this awesome write and lovely piece so breathtaking to read.. enjoy my friend.. with luv..

Constance La France

Date: 7/18/2010 8:14:00 AM

Congratulations, Dane Ann, on first place in my contest, Steaming Summer Love For Ladies, your poem was very romantic and lovely. Could you please send me your address by soupmail, so I can send your Certificate of Achievement In Poetry ~~~ Love Constance

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/18/2010 6:42:00 AM

A wonderful example of the contest theme.. good luck Dane Ann.. its a rare beauty.. with luv..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/17/2010 11:04:00 PM

Nicely done, Dane Ann. That last line says it all, dear. Luv, Andrea

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/17/2010 12:03:00 PM

Wow, Dane Ann, you captured it all in the last two lines. Infatuation can overtake our senses, then we end up in a loveless marriage. Well done, dear friend! Best wishes in the contest! Love, Carolyn (now write your limerick!!)

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 7/17/2010 7:07:00 AM

I can not write on your blog it's driving me coo coo not to be able to support you BUT I told you dear YOUR BIO is WAY to WIDE! I can't see the letters in the CAPTCHA box!! (Great sonnet...duck!) Light & Love

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 7/16/2010 9:22:00 PM

Last poem of the night. Enjoyed reading it. God Bless Phyl

Heather Hill

Date: 7/16/2010 3:16:00 PM

I love that, "romantic whispers smothered amid sin" very lovely! thanks for sharing and the comments on my pieces as well, means a lot, stay blessed!

Constance La France

Date: 7/16/2010 8:16:00 AM

soupmail

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/16/2010 4:15:00 AM

Interesting write..Very emotive and passionate ...Sara

John Freeman

Date: 7/15/2010 8:53:00 PM

Nice romantic setting here, Dane. Congratulations again. Agape, Moses

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/15/2010 8:19:00 PM

VERY nice, Dane Ann. It is quite romantic and very sonnet-ish! I bet you will do really well! Luv, Andrea