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SONNET – HE WALKS ALONE

He walks alone, without a hand to hold,
craving innocent passion, love so pure.
Hoping, dreaming, to fill his heart of gold,
for pain of yearning, is hard to endure.
Longing for love to share, a cheek to kiss,
to embrace, hold her in a warm caress,
stroke her hair, share togetherness and bliss,
to feel the depth of sweet love, nothing less.
Long, lonely days, wishing, longing to find,
one to love, soul and beauty to adore,
to share his love with gentle loving kind,
to end his lonely quest to seek no more.

To find his soulmate of female gender,
to cherish, behold, with love so tender.


T.J Grén

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 5/12/2016 9:41:00 AM
Awesome writing. I am delighted you share your work with the community.
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Date: 5/19/2016 12:47:00 AM
Thank you very much for your kind words, Madalyn. T.J
Date: 4/15/2016 1:26:00 PM
Hi T.J. another excellent Sonnet flows from your pen. As always your soft words take us through the emotions of your work. A beautiful write as always T.J. Your poems always have such meaning within them my friend. I always Love the gentle flow and expressive images. An excellent Sonnet. This is a definite seven and into my faves T.J....Mike.
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Date: 4/17/2016 11:30:00 PM
Thank you very much, Mike, for your continued support. T.J
Date: 2/11/2016 2:47:00 AM
paints a picture and raises emotion excellent work
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Date: 2/11/2016 10:08:00 AM
Thank you very much for your kind comment, Stephen. T.J
Date: 1/31/2016 9:33:00 PM
What A sorry state of affairs... having love unrequited has to be the bitterest pill to swallow. Well written T.J. Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 1/31/2016 10:41:00 PM
Thank you so much, Keith. It was an unfortunate state of affairs in my youth - but that has changed - and also given me the insight to write poems with feeling. T.J
Date: 12/29/2015 6:44:00 AM
A beautiful sonnet Teppo...best wishes...7
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Date: 12/29/2015 7:16:00 AM
Thank you very much, Joseph, for your visit and comments. T.J
Date: 11/30/2015 11:48:00 AM
You write amazing sonnets, Teppo. I am really very impressed. It's a very sweet invitation to some lucky woman, a beautifully penned piece.
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Date: 11/30/2015 12:54:00 PM
Thank you so much for your kind comments, Countess. There is a story behind every sonnet. It took a long time before the invitation was accepted. T.J
Date: 11/30/2015 12:03:00 AM
Read your collaboration with Robert and dropped by here, beautiful poem!
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Date: 11/30/2015 12:05:00 AM
Thank you very much for dropping by, Arthur. I appreciate your comment. T.J
Date: 11/29/2015 9:25:00 AM
Teppo, you have penned a beautiful heartfelt sonnet. Whether male or female we all long to be loved in such a way as you skillfully described. You captured the feeling of longing and desiring for your soulmate very well. Excellent use of your words. Great imagery as well. I'm so glad I stopped by to see this 7 piece. :-)Alexis
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Date: 11/29/2015 10:48:00 AM
Thank you kindly, Alexis. We all long to be loved - if only it was easier for those feeling love's yearning to find the right one. T.J
Date: 11/28/2015 4:07:00 PM
T.J., beautiful sonnet! They say there is a lot of fish in the sea, but to find the right one is the hardest thing to do. To many personalities, to many with set minds.
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Date: 11/29/2015 10:47:00 AM
Thank you, Eve. Your comment is so true - to find the right one.... T.J
Date: 11/27/2015 11:49:00 AM
FORGOT THE 7....
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Date: 11/29/2015 10:44:00 AM
Thanks, Robert. T.J
Date: 11/27/2015 11:48:00 AM
To trek alone, day is as dark night To walk with another, returneth the light Love's vision tis' a beautiful sight Seeketh truly, with all your might. A short tribute to that wondrous sonnet you gifted to us my friend. A7
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Date: 11/29/2015 10:44:00 AM
Thank you so much for your lovely comment, Robert. I appreciate it - as I appreciate the A7. T.J
Date: 11/27/2015 5:49:00 AM
If for a contest, reads like winning material..Enjoyed reading today..I hope that the soul mate is found..Thanks for stopping by my work "Awesome" which is a Haibun that is not a Haibun..Sara
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Date: 11/27/2015 7:14:00 AM
Thank you very much for reading my poem and for your comments. T.J
Date: 11/26/2015 4:05:00 PM
Awesome write......Skat
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Date: 11/27/2015 1:41:00 AM
Thank you very much, Skat. T.J
Date: 11/26/2015 12:47:00 PM
touched by this emotive write, TJ...huggs
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Date: 11/26/2015 1:30:00 PM
Thank you, Nette. I always appreciate your comments. -hugs- T.J
Date: 11/26/2015 8:09:00 AM
A sweet sonnet, TJ. Your couplet sums it all up very lovingly.
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Date: 11/26/2015 1:27:00 PM
Thank you, Lin. I appreciate your visit. -hugs- T.J
Date: 11/26/2015 8:04:00 AM
A worthy dream that most men desire. I am sure he won't walk alone for very long. A lovely piece!
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Date: 11/26/2015 1:25:00 PM
He walked alone for a long time but not anymore. Thank you for your comments, Richard. T.J
Date: 11/26/2015 7:15:00 AM
TJ it is hard trecking alone in this great big world. We are always looking for that hand to hold.
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Date: 11/26/2015 1:23:00 PM
Thank you, Tim. Yes we are. T.J
Date: 11/26/2015 6:48:00 AM
Beautiful imagery in this sad sonnet Teppo - love the final couplet - :-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/26/2015 1:13:00 PM
Thank you, Jan. I value your comments. -hugs- T.J