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Have you ever lived in a dream come -- TRUE Have you ever embraced the heat of -- LOVE Have you ever watched the twilight -- GROWING Have you ever listened to the voice -- WITHIN Have you ever sung the melody of -- POETRY Have you ever found your magic pen -- CREATING Have you ever felt the touch of GOD -- EVERLASTING Have you ever accepted a new Poetic-- FAMILY Have you ever given your lonely Heart-- LOVE I H A V E Dedicated to Dane-Ann Smith-Johnsen Co-Creater of this form of POETRY Called " End Line Word " Thank-YOU Dane Ann

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Date: 2/10/2010 9:46:00 AM
true love growing in poetry. i like it. -Always Lynette
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Date: 1/27/2010 9:13:00 AM
Very beautiful and touching, my friend. Both you and Dane - Ann are wonderful poets. Thank you for creating this sensational poetic form. I enjoyed it so much. lainie
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Date: 1/26/2010 8:37:00 PM
I can see how this works. What a great poetic form.Dane ann is a marvel!! I really like it, HG and thanks for your comments today. LUv andrea
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Date: 1/26/2010 7:55:00 PM
Wonderful form for your wonderful words.. message of beauty from your gifted pen.. have missed u HG... hope all is well with u ... thankxxx for your terrific comments on my poetry reads... have posted some "saucy" ones for your eyes ... using my versatility a lot more now... will have to try this form soon... thankxxx... luv always.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 1/26/2010 1:34:00 PM
Wow! This is so inspirational. I love the creative form with the right hand words making their own poem when read alone. Congratulations to you and Dane for coming of with this idea. Powerful ending left me back with my opening comment. Thank you for your kind comment. Have a good day! Karen
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Date: 1/26/2010 12:14:00 PM
new poem posted
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Date: 1/26/2010 12:01:00 PM
Wow, so now Dane Ann is not only experimenting with every verse form listed on the Soup but also coming up with new ones of her own. I love the joy and hope you express in this poem, HG. It's so nice to see your spirits are so high! Way to go, my friend. Much love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/26/2010 11:41:00 AM
Great call HG , for a great Souper , DA . Well presented and delivered , as ever ; Yes you have !!! ...
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Date: 1/26/2010 2:13:00 AM
Wow! HG. I do love this form. And this poem is a marvelous tribute to one very special family... Our poetry soup family. Thank you for honoring me with this dedication. You're the best. Love to you. Always, Dane Ann
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Date: 1/26/2010 12:33:00 AM
thank you for your comments.I definetley think I won the battle of the poems don't you?take care and thank you for your kind words.I will soup mail you later.
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Date: 1/25/2010 6:26:00 PM
I love the originality of this poem but most of all,i love its message,lets love ourselves.Outstanding..Charma
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Date: 1/25/2010 1:44:00 PM
new poem posted
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Date: 1/25/2010 9:14:00 AM
This is interesting.Just stopping by to say good morning and hope you have a great day.
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Date: 1/24/2010 8:06:00 PM
Another gem from you HG. Love, BG
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Date: 1/24/2010 6:39:00 PM
Awesome write HG and wonderful tribute to a wonderful poet. -Robert
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Date: 1/24/2010 6:12:00 PM
Cool! That's really something- creative and smart, I mean
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