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I love to wander amongst meadows and fields, the sky's like blue satin the lake's like a sheet. The air's pleasantly cool, as birds chirp and glide and crickets, as is their wont invent an orchestral chant. There in a bower two young lovers meet, their arms are entwined in a sweet embrace, and quickly the sweethearts with a lingering amorous kiss seal their secret loving retreat. Bells suddenly summon a flock of white sheep, I dare not count them Afraid I'd go to sleep. The spring is still gushing, thin reeds in abundance on the uneven edge. Serenity surrounds me All's beauty and grace For Lord, you are everywhere Giving us hope and care.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Date: 4/8/2020 10:11:00 PM
Beautiful sentiments Victor.6
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Date: 4/4/2020 6:32:00 AM
Great imagery on nature's gift!
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Date: 3/30/2020 9:50:00 AM
Excellent romantic, Spring poem Victor…I liked.
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Date: 3/22/2020 11:07:00 AM
Hi Victor, Spring is alive. This is such a beautiful, poetic gem. The gentle emotions and wonderful imagery, sing into the mind. I feel such peace and joy as I do read. It has to be a fav, my friend. Stay blessed. Your friend always....Mike.
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Date: 3/14/2020 10:25:00 PM
Excellent write Victor, I enjoyed reading this beautiful poem. Thank you for sharing it.
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Date: 3/14/2020 4:16:00 AM
Awww, staying on the happy side of life, Victor, lovely poem . . . : )
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Date: 3/10/2020 2:18:00 PM
Beautiful, Victor, your imagery is just stunning.. Love, emotion, and the presence of the Lord. Hugs Eve
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Date: 3/10/2020 1:50:00 PM
Victor, your exquisite poem, full of the grace and beauty of spring, young love, and God's goodness, is timely indeed. It was pure joy to read! Blessings.
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Date: 3/10/2020 12:55:00 PM
Love this verse: Bells suddenly summon/ a flock of white sheep,/ I dare not count them/ Afraid I'd go to sleep.
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Date: 3/10/2020 9:07:00 AM
My friend, this is an image filled and wonderful Spring poem! You have the gift to give such beauty in your poetry! A gem and a great fav too...
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Date: 3/9/2020 6:50:00 PM
the part about the sheep was so cute how you put it in. Very picturesque!
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Date: 3/9/2020 5:41:00 PM
Your poetry is always full of floral sense, Love it. xo
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Date: 3/9/2020 2:44:00 PM
- A wonderful poem ... really a sweet happiness, Victor :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/9/2020 1:42:00 PM
That is a beautiful poem my friend. A new fav
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Date: 3/9/2020 12:27:00 PM
what a charming springtime poem Victor:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/9/2020 11:20:00 AM
Victor, and after reading your poem " Serenity surrounds me"! Beautifully penned with wonderful imagery _Constance
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Date: 3/9/2020 8:52:00 AM
What a lovely poem.. I like the first stanza much.. And then some glimpse of brilliance when you count the sheep.. Wonderful write Victor..
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Date: 3/9/2020 7:15:00 AM
Beauty of nature you evoke in every verse--a joyous journey through your words my friend--a superb write, as always, Victor.
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Date: 3/9/2020 5:11:00 AM
A feel good verse Victor that oozes with happiness, well written. Tom
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