Haiku - Senryu Comments
Inspired by Jan Allison:
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HAIKU
oft my morning call...
birds in the warmer months... sing...
my natural alarm...
your haiku on my shoulder...
your blackbird... softly chirps...
morning...
SENRYU
inspirational...
your poetic prowess...
many thank yous'...
HAIKU
orange beaked blackbird...
dawns equivalent nightingale
sing on Jenny wren
SENRYU
inspirational
a haiku your talent paints
Jan a great poet
inspired mine...
I thank you...
write on dear poet
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Inspired by Robert Haige?
HAIKU
crystal clear...
poets palette... winter hues...
frosted window panes
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Inspired by Sarah Rosen
HAIKU
our closest star...
sol... it has a lifespan...
earth will die with it...
our planet's lifespan...
once under natures control...
pollution now rules...
earth will die with it...
sol will blow us all away...
climate change preempts...
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Inspired by Robert Haigh
HAIKU
live love to find one...
who lives love too... together...
true love realised...
Copyright © Mick Talbot | Year Posted 2018
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