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Haiku - Blue Door

in the wild spring wind I found a bright blue door beyond steps and I opened it- a thousand birds chirped a song ____________________ April 14, 2017 Poetry/Haiku/blue door Copyright Protected, ID 17-8924-86-0 All Rights Reserved. Written Under Pseudonym. Inspiration - climb your peaceful stairway Seasonal phrase - spring wind One Haiku Rick Parise Sixth Place

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Joseph May

Date: 5/29/2017 10:43:00 AM

Congrats on your win BW

John Michaels

Date: 4/20/2017 6:29:00 PM

Lovely imagery! I liked this one a lot. Good luck with the contest! Regards, John.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/17/2017 6:28:00 PM

This is very pretty, Constance! Love the last line. How magnificent that would sound.

Sunlite Wanter

Date: 4/14/2017 4:22:00 PM

I'm not a fan of the Haiku, because most can't capture beauty in such brief constraint like this one does. It is like a lovely glimpse of a lovely painting.

Constance La France
Date: 4/16/2017 6:24:00 PM

Sunlit thanks for the compliment.

Chris Green

Date: 4/14/2017 3:57:00 PM

Beautiful my friend. This poem sings softly as I read it today. Funny I was going to post a blue door poem today but now I think I'll wait. :)

Chris Green
Date: 4/14/2017 4:11:00 PM

You didn't ruin it my friend. It'll keep. I like yours better anyway. :)

Constance La France
Date: 4/14/2017 4:01:00 PM

Chris, sorry to ruin your blue door poem. I am sure there is room for another. Thanks for visiting my poem yoday!