Haiku 7-Traditional Haiku

trees dance leaves falling leering Father Time watches lamenting forest 09/19/16

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Date: 9/20/2016 11:25:00 PM

A very abstract haiku, especially with such an ominous 2nd line. Nice haiku, James.

James Inman
Date: 9/21/2016 7:24:00 AM

Thanks for the visit Timothy. I've been in a rather dark fairy tale mood lately.

Date: 9/19/2016 1:18:00 PM

a very dark autumnal haiku James! good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx

James Inman
Date: 9/19/2016 3:26:00 PM

Thanks Jan, are my writes getting darker or is it getting close to Halloween?

Date: 9/19/2016 11:59:00 AM

a languid way to express an autumnal scene..fine 'ku, james..huggs

James Inman
Date: 9/19/2016 12:27:00 PM

Thank you Nette.

Date: 9/19/2016 10:11:00 AM

Beautiful capture,Inman.

James Inman
Date: 9/19/2016 12:25:00 PM

Thanks for the visit Miraj.