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sounds of midsummer in starry night ~ moonlit lotus bloom posted on May 12, 2018

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Date: 6/2/2018 6:33:00 AM
A dreamy haiku! Congrats, Line!
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Date: 6/2/2018 8:10:00 AM
Thanks, Kim.
Date: 5/14/2018 8:17:00 AM
I was going to say beautiful, but Andrea said beautiful first, so I am just going to say it's a splenderific poem, Line.
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Date: 6/2/2018 8:10:00 AM
Thanks, Caren.
Date: 5/13/2018 2:54:00 PM
Beautiful, Line!
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Date: 5/13/2018 3:52:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea. Most appreciated.
Date: 5/13/2018 12:18:00 PM
- Smell of summer, well done Line :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/13/2018 12:38:00 PM
Summer Summer Summer... can it really be !!?
Date: 5/13/2018 2:40:00 AM
Serene and mind soothing! A lovely write! Stay bright and blessed dear Line.
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Date: 5/13/2018 9:16:00 AM
Thank you so much,, Besma. Most appreciated.
Date: 5/12/2018 9:10:00 PM
Beautiful!
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Date: 5/12/2018 9:22:00 PM
Thanks, Kim. Much appreciated.
Date: 5/12/2018 5:44:00 PM
Love your stunning imagery in this well worded haiku, Line! Great job, and good luck in the contest :)
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Date: 5/12/2018 6:03:00 PM
Thank you, Laura, for your much appreciated visit and comment.
Date: 5/12/2018 2:32:00 PM
Very lovely picture you have painted with this haiku. I can see that lotus flower in all its majesty, serenely floating away. Well done, my friend! Pandita
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Date: 5/12/2018 3:08:00 PM
Thank you, Pandita. Much apporeciated.
Date: 5/12/2018 12:32:00 PM
Line, i usually do not comment on haiku because most of them I do not understand. i have had other poets try to explain to me how they are written, I simply haven't caught on yet. Just letting you know I did stop by.
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Date: 5/12/2018 12:49:00 PM
Dear Daniel, a haiku is a bit like Zen thinking. A haiku is a moment caught in time juxtaposed to something unrelated and the reader is left to make the connection in his head - a really good haiku can reveal basic truths of the universe.
Date: 5/12/2018 8:47:00 AM
Sounds and looks pretty good Line...beautiful expression in haiku style...love and light...^WW^
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Date: 5/12/2018 11:16:00 AM
Thanks, WW, for your much appreciated visit and comment.
Date: 5/12/2018 8:29:00 AM
Beautiful Haiku! :)
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Date: 5/12/2018 8:33:00 AM
Thank you, Heidi, for your lovely visit and comment.

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