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galleons passing body of saline water far reaching graveyard 5/3/2018

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Date: 5/13/2018 3:12:00 PM
Congrats for being in top three, Eve. it includes a lot of us but it makes it very nice to see so many haiku at once by going through the list!
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Date: 5/13/2018 1:11:00 AM
Congratulations, Eve!
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Date: 5/12/2018 7:13:00 PM
Dropping back with my congratulations Eve:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 5/12/2018 3:38:00 PM
Eve, an exciting nautical haiku. Congratulations on your winning spot. ~ Sonia
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Date: 5/12/2018 3:35:00 PM
Back with congratulations Eve. Tom.
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Date: 5/12/2018 2:53:00 PM
Just like Jack from The Titanic Eve. Congratulations on this titanic haiku's placement.
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Date: 5/12/2018 8:37:00 AM
- Congratulations on your great 3rd place in the contest, Eve :) - Happy Weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/11/2018 11:34:00 PM
Lovely, Eve. Congrats on your podium win.
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Date: 5/7/2018 1:35:00 PM
You, my dear, have mastered this challenging form and your incredible talent is reflected in this well-crafted piece! Brilliant haiku! Hugs. Pandita
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Date: 5/6/2018 3:34:00 AM
A ship wreck in 17 syllables, and the impact is amazing.. excellent haiku Eve.
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Date: 5/5/2018 3:57:00 PM
such sad imagery Eve, so many lives were and still are lost at sea:-( love the picture you posted with the poem too:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 5/4/2018 10:12:00 AM
Great moving haiku, good luck in contest!
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Date: 5/4/2018 12:41:00 AM
Great hakiu Eve, this reminded me of a place off the west coast of Ireland called Spanish point, its where many ships of the armada sank after hitting the rocks. Good luck. Tom.
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Date: 5/4/2018 12:09:00 AM
Well done! It was one of the pictures I saw over at the contest?
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