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Vacant Eyes How come daddy? How can this possibly be? Why do you stare straight ahead, not looking at me? Remember me daddy? Remember me please... Submitted for: Capcha Contest sponsored by Judy Konos

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Laura Breidenthal

Date: 5/25/2015 9:59:00 PM

Powerful piece... heart-tugging....great verse! Always, Laura

Skat A

Date: 4/30/2015 6:16:00 PM

Nice win Tim. Forever ~SKAT~

Casarah Nance

Date: 4/29/2015 5:22:00 PM

aww this made the hands on my arms stand up....wow. well done my friend.

Sandra Haight

Date: 4/28/2015 7:48:00 PM

Congratulations on our win, Tim. Such a powerful message your words send. Heart-wrenching. Sandra

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/28/2015 4:13:00 PM

Heart wrenching one, Tim. I enjoyed your playful comment on my poem!

Jan Allison

Date: 4/28/2015 3:55:00 PM

oh so so heartbreaking Tim:-( congrats on your win Tim:-) Hugs Jan xx

Edward Ebbs

Date: 4/28/2015 2:29:00 PM

Powerful Tim, congrats :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/28/2015 1:38:00 PM

congrats on your win Tim, nice entry for the CAPTCHA CONTEST

Eileen Manassian

Date: 4/28/2015 12:10:00 PM

WOW, Tim...what a powerful write. I'm just taken by this. Lovely and sad....A lesson for all here. Hugs to you.

Judy Konos

Date: 4/28/2015 11:55:00 AM

Thank you for entering my contest.

Jaycee Cervenka

Date: 4/28/2015 8:09:00 AM

Tim, I really like the message and the voice used for this. You captured the small child well. A nice reminder to pay attention!~Jan