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Guy Loranger

G oing out with you that night. . . What was I . . . . . . . . . . . . . . Thinking? U nflinching pluck took over me; I could only think . . . . . . . . . . . of Y ou, and so I hurt another just to be with . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . you L eaving my steady boyfriend in the lurch. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . and O pening my heart to you instead, I’m now . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . wondering, R eally wondering. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . if A ny of that precious little time we shared, you and . . . . . . . . . . . . I, N ow haunts you too, at least. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .sometimes. G hosts of our beautiful young selves can . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .cross E ons of time for me because. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . your R omantic touch can never, Darling, ever leave my. . . . . . . . . . . . . ..mind. For Jared's Acrostic/End Line Poetry Contest

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Date: 5/30/2014 11:07:00 PM
I am getting to understand this form of poetry now , The way you lay out the poem so beautifully really helps us novices .
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Date: 5/23/2014 9:37:00 PM
ANDREA, Nice Acrostic, win... ..SKAT
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Date: 5/21/2014 7:09:00 PM
Wow, what a cool write. Love the subject matter.
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Date: 5/20/2014 9:20:00 AM
I knew it was a winner..Way to go..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 5/18/2014 2:12:00 PM
love this - very clever indeed, my friend
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Date: 5/18/2014 9:55:00 AM
Andrea just excellent....David
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Date: 5/18/2014 9:29:00 AM
That's a very good one- this form is NOT easy, I tried but then just gave up! LOL- you did great and congrats
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Date: 5/18/2014 7:06:00 AM
Congratulations, Andrea. You constantly amaze me with the places your pen takes you.
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Date: 5/17/2014 8:26:00 PM
congratulations on another great one, Andrea.. Love, Joyce
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Date: 5/17/2014 12:56:00 PM
Read my Memory lane poem. This one put the thought in my head. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 5/17/2014 10:40:00 AM
Such a marvel Andrea ! Congrats on a deserved win!
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Date: 5/17/2014 10:31:00 AM
Great job you did, Andrea! You make this form look easy, but I know that it is not!! Congrats on your win. // paul
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Date: 5/16/2014 8:29:00 PM
This is lovely and I am sure it took some time to work out. I was going to try this contest but it is just too time consuming. I don't have much time to be online these days. This one will be a winner for sure!
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Date: 5/16/2014 12:46:00 PM
Creative and expressive acrostic Andrea!
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Date: 5/16/2014 10:46:00 AM
This is very different and interesting. I imagine many people have a Guy Loranger in their past. Makes you wonder how things would have turned out If you wound up with Guy? Love, daver
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Date: 5/16/2014 5:22:00 AM
Very creative and professional work..Enjooyed reading this one..Reads like a winner to me..Thanks for the visit to my page.Sara
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Date: 5/15/2014 10:51:00 PM
Touching poem! By the way I work in a community college and some of the professors have written learned articles on comic books. Be careful - I may tell Mr. Weatherbee about you! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 5/15/2014 7:23:00 PM
Andrea, your poems are like postcards with messages from once important (and, maybe, still important) people. The photographs and ink may have faded but the memories haven't.
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Date: 5/15/2014 8:19:00 PM
that is sure a cool description for some of my poems! thanks, Jake
Date: 5/15/2014 2:50:00 PM
Hey Andrea, wow! that was a great piece. And you did such an excellent job with that style, I could not do that. Not to mention the excellent story within. Hope your Mothers Day was excellent. Best wishes always, take care. Great write!!
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Date: 5/15/2014 2:41:00 PM
Pretty darned good I say Andrea, well worth the stopping by..'
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Date: 5/15/2014 1:49:00 PM
wow ! you've risen to this challenge magnificently! this type of poem looks like it's very hard to write and yours flows so effortlessly. i'm very impressed!
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Date: 5/15/2014 12:45:00 PM
interesting concept, this end line acrostic, as for the poem it too is interesting to wonder if those who have been in our lives have ever thought about us, it would be nice to think they have....then again maybe not
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Date: 5/15/2014 9:04:00 AM
This is so sweet! I enjoyed my trip down your memory lane.
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Date: 5/14/2014 11:42:00 PM
Very well done Andrea....it flows very well....hugs Tim
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Date: 5/14/2014 10:00:00 PM
I'll tell ya---few people and pull this style of poetry off with this much flare. You do---and that's no salami .
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