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In Gurgling Rapids

in gurgling rapids salmon jump ladders ~ grizzlies feasting AP: 3rd place 2022 Submitted on April 17, 2018 for contest HAIKU: FISH sponsored by MICK TALBOT

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/7/2019 10:07:00 PM

Lovely imagery, Line!

Line Gauthier
Date: 6/7/2019 10:37:00 PM

Thank you, Kim. Much appreciated.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/18/2018 6:32:00 PM

YOurs is very cute, Line!! Maybe I will post mine soon. (Love the ladder part)

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/18/2018 6:45:00 PM

Thank you so much, Andrea. I will be on the look out for yours.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 4/18/2018 4:16:00 PM

Great, and realistic, haiku, Line! Janice

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/18/2018 6:45:00 PM

Thank you, Janice. Much appreciated.

Pashang Salehi

Date: 4/18/2018 2:41:00 PM

Circle of life...

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/18/2018 4:06:00 PM

Yes. A very wise reflexion. Thank you, Pashang.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 4/18/2018 7:15:00 AM

That image flashed up straight away, a grizzly fishing for salmon, great hakiu Line, good luck Tom

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/18/2018 10:16:00 AM

Thanks, Tom. Always appreciate your visits and comments. Line xx

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 4/18/2018 6:14:00 AM

You are the Mistress of Imagery! Nice visual!

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/18/2018 10:16:00 AM

LOL - thank you so much, Caren. Most appreciated. Line xx

Evelyn Knight

Date: 4/18/2018 2:35:00 AM

I also agree with what Carolyn has said below. Great imagery in this Haiku you've written Line.... Good luck in contest.

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/18/2018 10:16:00 AM

Thank you so much, Evelyn. Most appreciated.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/17/2018 3:11:00 PM

Love the energy in this awesome haiku, Line! Great imagery and a bit of a nature lesson as well. Best wishes in Mick's contest.

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/17/2018 3:26:00 PM

Thank you so much, Carolyn. Nothing anyone has not seen on National Geographic. LOL