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Guilty Raindrops

GUILTY RAINDROPS Telling me again where I went wrong, Just listen to the laughter of the falling rain - When everyone knows now, in vain, That it was the rain’s fault all along. Rainfall, you're no friend of mine. Where were you when she was storming out? When I was pleading and trying not to shout? For you and me now, it’s the end of the line. You made silly puddles and watched as my girl left town You just watched, and with all your power You didn’t pelt, pour, or shower, You didn’t even drizzle down. Surely there was something you could have done? If you’d poured from the sky She wouldn't have left me, but you just didn't try: But you didn't do nothing, you let her walk on. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . Written 8 April 2012 Entered in Black Eyed Susan’s Contest Blame It on the Rain

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Date: 4/24/2012 6:41:00 PM
Congrad's on your big win. Light & Love
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Date: 4/19/2012 5:44:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning poem in Susan's "Blame It on the Rain" contest Sidney. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/18/2012 6:16:00 PM
I think this was a good expression of your inner child! LOL Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 4/18/2012 10:15:00 AM
Sidney congrats on your win...David
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Date: 4/18/2012 9:46:00 AM
You play a great blame game. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 4/18/2012 8:49:00 AM
Congratulations on your #5 win in my contest!
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Date: 4/8/2012 7:48:00 AM
Cool write Sid..some times in life people are just meant to walk on.. Hugs xx
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