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Growing Old In Love With You

I was just a young lady when I met you with desire- Before my peak of emotions ran crazy like wild fire- I ran to the ends of the earth to find you in love- And now I think inside my words weren’t enough. I was just a grown lady when I saw you with her- But my mind racing so fast the picture was a blur- I ran to the seat at the bar and drank myself to death- For another minute without you I would lose my breath. I was just an old lady when I realized you were the one- But I never had the chance to live, you tore my world undone- I ran to my grave in love with a stranger I thought I knew- And now I die in loneliness taking one last gasp for you. October 1, 2016

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Date: 10/5/2016 6:22:00 AM
Very poetically written, Laura, though I'm glad it's fictional:)
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Date: 10/1/2016 11:13:00 AM
A once in a lifetime love. Very nice. Thank you for your kind words. Love, Joyce
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Date: 10/1/2016 11:08:00 AM
Wasted days and wasted nights, I think that was a song...Good one LuLoo
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Date: 10/1/2016 11:09:00 AM
thank you sweet Charlie :)-luloo

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