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Old piano lost, forgotten in dust; I loved him so much, my forever dream who caressed the keys, now- a name engraved. __________________ November 1, 2017 Poetry/Tableau Verse/ Grief Tableau Copyright Protected, ID 17-9542-60-0 All Rights Reserved. Written for the contest, Tableau Prints sponsor, Nette Onclaud Second Place

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Jan Allison

Date: 11/8/2017 6:43:00 PM

Dropping back with my congrats Constance:-) hugs jan xx

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/8/2017 3:26:00 PM

constance, kudos on your great win with this stunning, sad entry.. thanks for joining!

Subimal Sinha-Roy

Date: 11/6/2017 11:37:00 PM

Congratulations, BW on your win.

Eve Roper

Date: 11/6/2017 8:13:00 PM

Broken Wings, congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve ~`*

Sandra Haight

Date: 11/6/2017 5:06:00 PM

Sad and heartfelt, Constance. Congratulations on your podium win. Hugs, Sandra

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/6/2017 4:33:00 PM

Great imagery! Congrats on your win!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/6/2017 3:04:00 PM

Loving this one again, Constance. congrats on a very fine win.

John Michaels

Date: 11/6/2017 1:57:00 PM

The depth of emotion carries through your words, BW - congrats on your win! Regards, John.

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 11/2/2017 9:20:00 AM

Such sweet sadness, BW. A aching, lovingly expressed poem. Your heart shines through in this poignant write. Splendid, aurora bright poetry. Love and joy always.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/1/2017 5:00:00 PM

You took the melancholy route, same as me. Beautiful, Constance. And I hope Patches actually is visiting you in those dreams.

Mike Gentile

Date: 11/1/2017 8:36:00 AM

So sad and sweet. Emotions provoked! A wonderful write.

James Marshall Goff

Date: 11/1/2017 8:05:00 AM

Line 3 is amazing...nice!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 11/1/2017 6:40:00 AM

I feel the grief reading this poem--best for a win BW!

Jan Allison

Date: 11/1/2017 6:31:00 AM

Such a touching poem beautiful yet sad imagery:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx

Judith S

Date: 11/1/2017 5:36:00 AM

Beautifully sad. Love the old piano picture :)

Russell Sivey

Date: 11/1/2017 5:29:00 AM

What a perfect write for this contest! I'm going to have to look into this contest, it looks interesting! You have delivered a masterful poem, one that brings a massive amount of feeling throughout it and allows us to grasp the emotions within each word! What a spectacular piece, Great Work!!