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Greedy Pine, Thirsty Blossoms

(a Four-verse Cinquain) Parched red roses bow their heads in pain filled surrender, finished. Faded holly hocks give up hope, too sad to care, colorless. Wilted sweet peas loose their talons, shrivel, curl in sorrow, die. Healthy white pine sucks up moisture and grants no mercy, thrives.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 10/5/2014 1:44:00 PM
Guess its down to nature and survival of the fittest - lovely imagery here:-) hugs jan xxx
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Cona Adams
Date: 10/5/2014 2:21:00 PM
Yes, always, in every aspect of nature. Thanks.

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