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Patience

We call her Patience grazing done she heads for the barn to wait her turn written March 09, 2018

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Anisha Dutta

Date: 3/13/2018 1:13:00 PM

Well done. Good one i love haiku to rhyme. Best Wihes

Reason A. Poteet
Date: 10/11/2023 5:14:00 AM

It is 17 syllables, should put it in three lines for the purists. Just a memoir for my granddaughter who loves cows (and their owner, her boyfriend)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 3/9/2018 4:47:00 PM

I picture the cows gazing..slowly..taking their sweet time! Unique theme, RAP.

Reason A. Poteet
Date: 3/10/2018 10:43:00 AM

Thanks, so true. Part of the food chain which sustains life as we know it.