Dragonfly

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Swimming beneath a sunless sky, Cherished melodies, serenade yours truly Redolent of freshly baked loaves Sun flare glistening on cinnamon skin ~ Graceful, striking dragonflies Perform angelic, graphic aerial pageants Brilliantly versed, competent displays Flamboyant minuscule Red Arrows, Slothful, reposeful disposition Concealed beneath a thermal burrow Happiness cannot be purchased ~ Brewing destined to be found Such as the lost, buried treasures of Lima.

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Constance La France

Date: 3/3/2021 8:19:00 AM

Joanna, congratulations on your win in Brian's contest with your wonderfully penned Rhyme poem, well done _Constance

Joanna Feltham
Date: 3/3/2021 11:30:00 AM

Thank you.

Brian Sambourne

Date: 1/1/2021 5:33:00 PM

Hello Joanna, There are many dragonflies at my cabin in the woods of the Canadian Shield. Your description of these aerial insects as "Flamboyant miniscule red arrows" is imaginative + precise. Another fine read for me. Cheers Brian

Joanna Feltham
Date: 1/7/2021 12:13:00 AM

Thank you