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Goodnight My Sweet

come, come to me o' sacred word of life a murmur, a glimpse be known of love endless through the night the days, sad days some bitter tears a vine still grows of light yet no one here your lasting song rose petals of endless flight and now remain a word, a stone beneath the rust you lie with beaded tear the path I roam goodnight my sweet, goodnight _________________ Overgrown With Vines - Poetry Contest 09/24/2016

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Date: 7/6/2017 10:44:00 AM
Love it Rick, a very worthy winner, congratulations.
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Date: 7/6/2017 6:36:00 AM
Congrats Rick, for your well-deserved top placement, with this fine verse!! ;-)
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Date: 7/5/2017 12:40:00 PM
Congrats Rick to win top
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Date: 7/5/2017 12:38:00 PM
This is gorgeous. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 7/5/2017 8:04:00 AM
Simply wonderful Rick. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 7/5/2017 6:50:00 AM
Lovely, bittersweet write, Rick--CONGRATS on your win! Janice
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Date: 10/14/2016 11:38:00 AM
Short but very effective work..No wonder it is on the winners' page..Way to go..Congrats ..Sara
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Date: 10/10/2016 1:10:00 PM
Lovely phrasing Rick.
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Date: 10/10/2016 10:16:00 AM
Rick, congratulations on your win in my contest ~
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Date: 10/9/2016 11:30:00 AM
Rick-loved this one... one of my faves in the contest- congratulations on your placement :)-luloo
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Date: 10/9/2016 11:50:00 AM
Howdy Laura....ThankU - Enjoy your day!!!!The rain is falling in Keizer, Oregon.....A cleansing rebirth. I'm waiting for The Winds of Change...a new muse abound ;)) Enjoy
Date: 10/8/2016 5:49:00 PM
Wonderful Rick, love the style. This would have topped my list. Congratulations....
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Date: 9/24/2016 2:40:00 PM
this is terrific Rick...great writing
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