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Goodbye

Last toll, the bells call to midnight I bid a final farewell to the moon time has left me in abandonment dear darkness, I shall succumb soon Goodbye to the maker's mark a blight often hidden from sight tempting fate of the afflicted offering gifts up to the night Goodbye to the pain and indignation to those that open up closing wounds good day to the light and adoration dear darkness, I shall succumb soon words, worthless, wither with the worry gone, the song, no longer in a hurry

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 12/6/2017 7:40:00 AM
Breathtaking and heartbreaking.
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Date: 11/29/2017 3:22:00 PM
Tim, I hope you're ok. And hope you're not leaving just taking a break... hugs and smiles :)
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Date: 11/27/2017 10:06:00 PM
This poem sure resonates with me, not only darkness but when you see the pettiness of some whilst seeing the suffering of others, brings just more sadness. Great write!
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Date: 11/27/2017 6:33:00 PM
hmm Tim get your butt out of that darkness... remember there is a light at the end of the tunnel....... might just need a new battery.......Seren
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Date: 11/27/2017 6:27:00 PM
Tim this is a such a sad poem <3 Hugs
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Date: 11/27/2017 5:19:00 PM
A deep, heartfelt and painful write Tim. The dark theme of your poem is poignantly expressed.. warmest wishes.
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Date: 11/27/2017 3:20:00 PM
I hope you are not leaving Tim.A lovely poem. have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 11/27/2017 3:04:00 PM
Painfully sad Tim, hopefully fiction, well done...
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Date: 11/27/2017 1:39:00 PM
Mysterious...Kept me wondering...All the best Tim
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Date: 11/27/2017 11:32:00 AM
I hope you are ok Tim. This is a sad, but well written poem, as always. I also hope you are not leaving the site or stopping writing. Take Care :)
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Date: 11/27/2017 11:22:00 AM
The bells ring their farewell..but the light offers hope...Well expressed Tim
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Date: 11/27/2017 11:11:00 AM
Should not happen,Tim, life needs to be respected and peaceful? hugs eve
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