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Good Day Footles

Sun glows Wind blows Trees sway It’s May Blooms beam Bees swarm Birds sing Songs ring Good day Kids play Pain stills Joy fills Bird trills Sound spills Hate wanes Peace reigns Winds kiss It’s bliss _____________ May.20.2022 ~Placed Fifth~ A Brian Strand Premiere Choice Poetry Contest Sponsor- Brian Strand

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John Watt
Date: 5/25/2022 1:43:00 PM
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Valsa, a warm congrats for your win with your first ever footles! Love all the spring imagery... my favorite is "Birds sing / Songs ring. Let's pray that "Hate wanes / Peace reigns" soon becomes a reality in Ukraine. Enjoy your day, my friend ~ John
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 5/25/2022 8:11:00 AM
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This is marvelous!
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Jcb Brul
Date: 5/22/2022 10:27:00 PM
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Wow, you did it my friend! Brilliant set of footles! Congratulations.
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Unseeking Seeker
Date: 5/22/2022 10:09:00 PM
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Beautiful Footle, Valsa, congrats on your win
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Sotto Poet
Date: 5/21/2022 4:08:00 AM
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Valsa, you provide a powerful sight in each pair. It's something that will appeal to Brian, making it a strong contender. really beautifully done.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 5/20/2022 4:49:00 PM
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I have a feeling you are going to win with this one!! Great job with footles.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 5/20/2022 1:40:00 PM
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Wow! This is extra-sweet, Valsa. Keep fiddling with these footles! You've got the touch! Smiles, Gershon
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Rico Leffanta
Date: 5/20/2022 11:19:00 AM
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Well done! Aloha!
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Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 5/20/2022 8:03:00 AM
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Charming, charming, charming~ this is a definite WINNER! The brevity and imagery delightful! :)Paulette
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Alexis Y.
Date: 5/20/2022 5:08:00 AM
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WoW! Valsa You composed a well written string of footles. Good content and imagery. Best wishes in the contest. Have a nice day;-) Alexis
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/20/2022 4:26:00 AM
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Great image in every pair. Brian loves these. Well done, Valsa.
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Valsa George
Date: 5/20/2022 4:57:00 AM
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So happy to hear that you admire my first attempt ! Even the term 'Footle' has been new to me. Thanks a lot Vijay
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Victor Buhagiar
Date: 5/20/2022 1:34:00 AM
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You composed a string of ideas that are full of images and color.
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Valsa George
Date: 5/20/2022 4:55:00 AM
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Thank you so much Victor.... ! Feel enthused....
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Jan Allison
Date: 5/19/2022 11:51:00 PM
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what a super string of footles:-) hugs Jan xx
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Valsa George
Date: 5/20/2022 4:54:00 AM
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Thanks a lot Jan.... ! This support is much valued as this is my first attempt

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