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I started writing this a few days after my mom passed in December. I ended it differently at that time to make it more inclusive of all who knew her and  I read this at her memorial service.   I changed the last stanza today to make it more personal. 

 

 

 

On a cold December morning, the angels came for you, to take you home to Jesus, as you bid this life adieu. Leaving behind your brokenness, you ascended to the pearly gates. Freed from the shackles of earthly bonds, you now dwell in heavenly estates. Your youth has been restored, and you are dancing on streets of gold, singing with angelic choirs, hymns both new and old. Pain and fear no longer reign, no more tears will you ever cry. It's we the living who still weep, because we must say good-bye. Good-bye, dear Mama, I love you so. I'll miss you, my mother, my friend. You left this world too soon, too soon. Farewell until we meet again. Entered in John Hamilton's "Best Rhyming Poem of this year" contest 3/2/17

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Date: 4/12/2017 8:07:00 AM
Hi Kim - sorry for your loss - this is a great tribute. Well deserved placement in the contest.
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Date: 3/16/2017 1:57:00 PM
Thanks for posting this sad but very touching poem. I didn't know it was real life for you so sorry for the loss of your mother. A win doesn't really help at this point, but congrats any way!
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Kim Merryman
Date: 3/18/2017 4:54:00 PM
Thanks for my placement in your contest, John. You had some amazing entries.
Date: 3/16/2017 9:44:00 AM
This is a beautiful poem about your mother, Kim:) sorry for your loss once again, but the last line is so true and that hope keeps us smiling amidst our sorrow:)
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Kim Merryman
Date: 3/18/2017 4:53:00 PM
Thank you, Jo!
Date: 3/16/2017 9:04:00 AM
Hi Kim. Sorry for your loss described in this great tribute poem to your mom.
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Date: 3/18/2017 4:53:00 PM
Thank you, Curtis!
Date: 3/14/2017 6:46:00 PM
My condolences on the passing of your mother, but what a beautiful poetic tribute to her. I believe we all go to that better place. X
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Date: 3/18/2017 4:52:00 PM
Thank you, Elizabeth!
Date: 3/3/2017 7:20:00 PM
Kim this is a precious poem and I am glad you got to read it at her funeral. I did one for my stepdad who died of alzheimers and it was an honor to read it for him that day. Sorry again for your loss, dear.
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Date: 3/12/2017 4:41:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea!
Date: 3/2/2017 10:11:00 PM
Oh what a beautiful and heartfelt tribute to your beloved mother, Kim! What a comfort you portrayed in the fact that she is now happy in heaven with our Lord! God bless you. :)
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Kim Merryman
Date: 3/3/2017 3:03:00 PM
Thank you, Laura! Knowing she's with Jesus makes it easier to accept her passing.
Date: 3/2/2017 4:05:00 PM
So beautiful dear...she is smiling down on you
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Date: 3/3/2017 3:01:00 PM
Thank you, Tim!
Date: 3/2/2017 4:04:00 PM
very touching, kim! sorry for your loss...
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Kim Merryman
Date: 3/3/2017 3:00:00 PM
Thank you, Ilene!
Date: 3/2/2017 3:28:00 PM
The loss of a mother, a sad experience. Sorry for the loss. Beautiful poem.
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Date: 3/3/2017 3:00:00 PM
Thank you, Adeniji!
Date: 3/2/2017 2:58:00 PM
Beautiful Kim and so sorry for your loss.
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Date: 3/3/2017 2:59:00 PM
Thank you, Sara!
Date: 3/2/2017 2:17:00 PM
I am so sorry for your loss Kim. I dread the day I lose my lovely mum and hope I could write something as beautiful and moving as you have done:-)A lovely tribute to your dear mum:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/3/2017 2:59:00 PM
Thank you, Jan! I knew the day was coming, but hoped it would be farther down the road.
Date: 3/2/2017 1:55:00 PM
Very nice, Kim. Hugs- a-million!
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Kim Merryman
Date: 3/3/2017 2:58:00 PM
Thank you, Kim!
Date: 3/2/2017 1:46:00 PM
- Beautiful goodbye to your mother, Kim - Sorry for your loss - It is six years since my mother died and I miss her every day - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Kim Merryman
Date: 3/3/2017 2:57:00 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise! I miss her very much!

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