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Good-Bye Junk Food

Good-bye Little Debbie cakes, Mr. HO HO, Boo hoo hoo, Aunt Twinkie too, I'm surely gonna miss, all of you. Good-bye fresh bakery donuts, Audios gravy covered steak, Truffles with cream too, I'm really gonna miss, all of you. So long, Long Johns, My scrumptious chocolate Sunday's, Uncle French Fry too, Be gone from my hips, all of you. Hello almond nuts, and legume, Water packed tuna and brother salmon too, Greeting my low fat diet butter, I must welcome within, all of you. Linda Terrell March 13, 2010 I have created poem/lyric verses for a heart-smart lifestyle to lower cholesterol as we should all follow. It would make an informing cheery song or silly jingle.

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Date: 3/13/2010 5:44:00 PM
ha good one... ahh... i couldn't survive without the sweets
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Date: 3/13/2010 9:49:00 AM
FUNNY VERY NICE WRITE HOPE FOR CONTEST IF SO GOOD LUCK LOVED IT FALESHIA
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Date: 3/13/2010 7:59:00 AM
Way to go, Linda! Not only do I admire your poetic style, but the message is one that needs to be sung from the rooftops. I saw a very large woman at the grocery store. She had two carts loaded with Ho Hos, Little Debbie cakes and everything she should try to avoid. Applause!! Love, Carolyn
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