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Golden Rod Sunrise

He took the Golden Rods As a paintbrush Swept them across the sky Painted yellow sunshine Bright against the natural eye Then the artist used Cornflowers Filled in all the empty space This gracious sky he decorated On this my fall day But very early in the morn The poor country bride Swept across the dale Dressed in her gray muslin gown Adorned in her bridal vale Dragging her gray shawl Against the red clay ground Running up the hill On across the creek Her laughter very shrill As she danced and skipped Happy with her new love found She had married the artist Who painted away The gray fog of the morning With the Golden Rod today

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/29/2010 1:54:00 AM
nice peace here my friend thank you duncan
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Date: 10/16/2010 7:02:00 PM
vrery poetic indeed!
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Date: 10/9/2010 3:19:00 PM
Nice poem.
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Date: 10/9/2010 11:35:00 AM
a very pretty picture
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Date: 10/8/2010 8:22:00 PM
what an interesting personification poem, Sara. You are very clever with these kinds. I loved the imagery of the yellow flowers. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 10/8/2010 7:45:00 PM
Sara, I love the imagery of your write. Could feel her joy through your words. Love Wilma
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Date: 10/8/2010 7:25:00 PM
Sweet romantic poem. Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
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Date: 10/8/2010 6:37:00 PM
very wonderful write on Golden Rod Sunrise, with wonderful imagination, Sara
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Date: 10/8/2010 4:38:00 PM
You are such an inspiration. Jamie.x
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Date: 10/8/2010 2:31:00 PM
Thanks here for the "Golden Rod", as opposed the 'Deadly Nightshade' ! Great write dear poet ! james
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Date: 10/8/2010 1:42:00 PM
Great write Sara, one of my fav. in a long time... what a wonderful poet you are..Bravo my dear...Luv Michael
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