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Gold Gown

Russet leaves float down in the breeze Little red dancing bits This scenery, I want to freeze Trees shedding their outfits Those bare brown branches look feisty In contrast to fall leaves Which look so gorgeous and rusty With shivers up their sleeves Autumn is here rustling her dress Auburn leaves flutter down Where else can we find such finesse? Moving gems in gold gown 09.15.2020

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Date: 9/18/2020 3:24:00 PM
Jo Daniel, congratulations on your winning placement with your vivid Autumn poem, really liked the line " shivers up their sleeves", very creative!
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Date: 9/18/2020 8:27:00 AM
Love your imagery here, Jo!
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Date: 9/15/2020 11:03:00 PM
"Trees shedding their outfits", "Moving gems in gold gown", so many wonderful autumn images with vivid color and a nip in the air!
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Date: 9/15/2020 2:00:00 PM
Lovely autumn images in color and movement of "rustling" "shiver," and "shedding," Jo. Congratulations on your winning placement.
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Date: 9/15/2020 8:54:00 AM
We have chosen the same subject. Your poem is lively and enchanting. ~~
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