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Going Un-Noticed

The short pink dress the long blonde hair She cakes on her makeup but you dont care She wants you to notice that shes there Like the night of your first kiss Do you tell her you love her does she know Does she know how you feel although its been a year Do you treat her with love or make her feel fear She waits for you to open her door but you bite her head off and then enter a storm She doesnt know why she deserves this pain waiting for someone to show her the way she'l forgive you again and again and again until one day, it will be too late

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/18/2010 7:31:00 PM
Every dog has its day. A person can only take so much and then they either leave or retalliate. Excellent piece.
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