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SNOW

Now the night has gone And the air is comin' cold How this melancholy falls Like snow around my soul So cold. So cold. So cold. I still hear your name Like an echo in some hall It still burns this flame Like snow around my soul So cold. So cold. So cold. You used to say In a world where mercy has died You'd always stay Here right by my side Though my life goes on I'm frozen in my role In an avalanche at dawn This snow around my soul. So cold. So cold. So cold WATCH ME SING THIS IN CONCERT. YOUTUBE: TYPE IN LOUIS SPENCE & DONNA OAKLEY. SNOW UPON MY SOUL. THANK YOU

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Date: 11/26/2010 11:40:00 AM
Hello Louis, Sad but very well written. Like watching a story unfold. Thank you for sharing this As Always, Shar
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Louis Spence
Date: 5/28/2011 8:43:00 AM
Many thanks for your time and kind comments. Louis
Date: 11/25/2010 3:48:00 AM
An excellent write, the metaphor was right on target, creating a vivid read.
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Louis Spence
Date: 5/28/2011 8:44:00 AM
Thanks Anthony. Much appreciated. Louis

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