Gazing At the Dawn

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every mind soon awakens the light of dawn horizons of gold gently calling to explore hidden mysteries of life 4/13/17

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Date: 4/14/2017 1:18:00 AM

Beautiful tanka, Janis, very deep.

Janis Thompson
Date: 4/14/2017 9:45:00 AM

Thanks Darren.

Date: 4/14/2017 12:19:00 AM

A profoun tanka. 7+ for this one, Janis.

Janis Thompson
Date: 4/14/2017 9:45:00 AM

So glad to hear from you. Thanks Afzal.

Date: 4/13/2017 8:32:00 PM

Indeed, Janis, the dawn is a special, precious time.

Janis Thompson
Date: 4/14/2017 9:46:00 AM

Thanks Doug.

Date: 4/13/2017 5:42:00 AM

- You have described a beautiful picture, thank you Janis - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Janis Thompson
Date: 4/14/2017 9:47:00 AM

Thanks Anne-Lise. Blessings, Janis.