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Garden of Lust Cm

" The night was a garden of eyes" - The Blue Bouquet ______________________________ Silently their eyes seem to close Tiny dancers abreast The moon obscured by a teardrop My blue rose weeping song Wiping each teardrop from her face Dew drops shimmer in dance In her garden of shameful eyes Her secret now revealed ______________________________ August 26, 2019 Contest : Choose An Octavio Paz Line Sponsor : Nette Onclaud

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Date: 8/31/2019 10:45:00 PM
Rick, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
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Date: 8/30/2019 5:20:00 PM
a very enigmatic one and beautiful. Congrats.
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Date: 8/30/2019 1:12:00 AM
cryptic in a symbolic way, rick.. you made us all interpret the message through our own eyes... thanks for joining and big congrats to you with a fine win!..huggs
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Date: 8/26/2019 1:33:00 PM
A compelling write that makes the reader beg to know her secret, Rick! Nette is sure to like it too. Been dealing with some health issues and my brother is in a hospital with sepsis. Hope things are going better for you! Hugs, Carolyn
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