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Growing, blowing, flowing, slowing, garden is a growing, blowing dream; but flowing, slowing to a sad gleam. ______________________________ August 6, 2019 Poetry/Tyburn/Garden Copyright Protected, ID 19- 1171-326-02 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, Your Turn For A Tyburn sponsor, Charles Messina Second Place

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Date: 9/1/2019 6:50:00 PM
very well done, Constance. Congrats on your win. I loved that slowing to a gleam line!!
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Date: 9/2/2019 4:48:00 PM
Andrea, thanks for the compliment and congrats ~
Date: 8/31/2019 5:11:00 AM
This is a beautiful tyburn Constance. Awesome write my dear friend. Congratulations on your win in my contest. PS: Thanks for the Soup Mail..You are very welcome :) Well deserved!
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Date: 9/1/2019 3:58:00 PM
Charles thanks for another inspiring contest and for my placement
Date: 8/30/2019 9:56:00 AM
a real beauty! Congrats on the win.
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Date: 9/1/2019 3:58:00 PM
Jeanne thanks for the compliment and the congrats
Date: 8/30/2019 9:26:00 AM
It's amazing how you managed to dactyl within such a devilishly complex form as tyburn. Congrats, D.H.
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Date: 9/1/2019 3:59:00 PM
Kurt thanks for the compliment and the congrats
Date: 8/30/2019 7:41:00 AM
- Congratulations on your lovely Tyburn poem, D.H. :) - hugs and happy weekend // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/1/2019 4:00:00 PM
Anne_lise thanks for the congratulations
Date: 8/6/2019 12:29:00 PM
I have not attempted this form or looked at the boundaries of it yet, but you paint a lovely picture with your words...good write! hugs :)
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Date: 9/1/2019 4:01:00 PM
Sandra thanks for the compliment
Date: 8/6/2019 9:27:00 AM
Lovely done Constance! Good luck in the contest. xomo
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Date: 9/1/2019 4:01:00 PM
Maureen thank you very much
Date: 8/6/2019 7:51:00 AM
Hi poetic friends! This is the first Tyburn poem I have ever written and I liked it a lot, short and wonderful with endless inspiring themes possible.
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