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TITLES OF NOVELS CONTEST SPONSOR: Nette Onclaud A FAREWELL TO ARMS Goodbye, my love, rising above your deadly disease, Don’t cry, my love, surprising God with your friendly ease. Fly free, my love, say hello to beautiful mother, Defy me, my love, days will go on like no other. Leave my arms as if you wish to be in sweet heaven, Leave my arms as if you wish to live to be seven. Goodbye, my love, rising above your deadly disease. All seven lines have 13 syllables Line 1 & 2 have the same internal rhyme Line 3 & 4 have the same internal rhyme Line 5 & 6 start with the same eight words, ending in rhyme Line 7 is a repeat of line 1 Date Written: June 11, 2016

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Date: 6/14/2016 2:59:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Laura and good to see you on the list.
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Date: 6/14/2016 4:40:00 AM
Congrats, Laura. Great form.~karam~
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Date: 6/14/2016 6:57:00 AM
thank you Karam :)-luloo
Date: 6/14/2016 3:41:00 AM
lovely voice, amazing structure and tonality all rolled into one... lou, thanks for supporting my contest and big congrats!..huggs
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Date: 6/14/2016 6:56:00 AM
thank you for my placement Nette! :)-luloo
Date: 6/13/2016 6:21:00 PM
Your voice is so sweet reading this, Laura. I really enjoyed hearing your poem. Cool form with the 13 syllables each line! (the whole invented form is very nicely thought out)
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Date: 6/14/2016 6:51:00 AM
thank you Sweet lady Andrea:)-luloo
Date: 6/12/2016 5:24:00 AM
A sad write:) quite a challenging form you've chosen:) well done, Laura:) I couldn't enter mine for the contest:(
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Lu Loo
Date: 6/12/2016 9:54:00 AM
thank you Jo, it was hard for me too because it filled up sooo quickly..have a blessed day :)-luloo

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