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Fulfilling Life - Collaboration With White Wolf

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An empty shell, abandoned am I left alone? left to sigh? I once housed a caterpillar an ambitious butterfly Now I miss my old cocoon and still cannot fly Come pick me up soar the skies create turbulence with you Leaving behind our worn-out lives morphing into something new *** September 19, 2017 Copyright © White Wolf and Darren White

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Joanna Daniel

Date: 9/22/2017 7:47:00 AM

Lovely collaboration, Darren and WW:) wishful and sad, a tone I like :)

Darren White
Date: 9/27/2017 7:03:00 AM

Thanks Jo, we loved writing this.

Charlie Smith

Date: 9/20/2017 7:34:00 AM

Wonderful work, congratulations on your beautiful collaboration...

Darren White
Date: 9/27/2017 7:03:00 AM

Thanks so much Charlie :)

Maria Williams

Date: 9/20/2017 4:28:00 AM

Another excellent collaboration Darren and WW. I love the way you two blend...Maria

Darren White
Date: 9/20/2017 7:27:00 AM

Thanks Maria :)

White Wolf

Date: 9/20/2017 4:26:00 AM

I so wish to colour that butterfly in!!! LOL.

Darren White
Date: 9/20/2017 7:26:00 AM

LOL silly, go get your crayons and start colouring ;)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/19/2017 7:44:00 PM

I love seeing what you two create together!! I need to go visit him and see if he has this one posted up at his own wall. VERY nice, Darren.

Darren White
Date: 9/20/2017 7:27:00 AM

Thank you Andrea :)

Patricia Cresswell

Date: 9/19/2017 2:46:00 PM

A good piece of work.

Darren White
Date: 9/20/2017 7:27:00 AM

Thanks Patricia :)

Lin Lane

Date: 9/19/2017 8:49:00 AM

Becoming something or someone new is not an easy task, but then most worthwhile things in life are not handed to us. An honest and inspirational write from you two, Whites.

Darren White
Date: 9/20/2017 7:29:00 AM

No, it isn't easy at all. But it all starts with an internal 'attitude' that you very consciously address.

Phatt Matt

Date: 9/19/2017 7:54:00 AM

A 7 for you two. goodluck!!~phatt

Darren White
Date: 9/20/2017 7:29:00 AM

Thank you phatt :)

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 9/19/2017 7:39:00 AM

Short, deep, perfect. Wonderful pen. Metamorphosis for two. xomo x2

Darren White
Date: 9/20/2017 7:30:00 AM

Merci ma mo :)