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Frozen In Crystalline - Number 4

Pearly dreams for my tomorrows await release from frozen shadows. ------------------------------------------ 23 / 11 / 2014 Contest: Frozen in Crystalline Sponsor: Andrea Dietrich Placed: 2nd

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/8/2023 12:37:00 PM

oh my goodness, even way back here, I see I already left a comment. Let me try to find one I never read

Paul Callus
Date: 11/8/2023 2:24:00 PM

Thank you for trying so hard, Andrea! It's about time that Soup Admin came up with a coloured dot for each poem we visited (such as in Twitter). Goodnight // paul

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 12/1/2014 11:21:00 AM

Paul, you have mastered this form! You show us how it should be done! This piece is truly amazing in the real sense of the word! Congratulations on a wonderful, well-deserved win! Warmest regards, Pandita

Paul Callus
Date: 12/2/2014 2:15:00 PM

Thank you Pandita! You are too kind:) I am so pleased that I have been able to share this poem with you. hugs // paul

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 11/30/2014 7:28:00 PM

A WOW! Lovely, thoughtful image, Paul...Congrats on your wonderful win!! Hugs, Rhonda

Paul Callus
Date: 12/1/2014 9:55:00 AM

Thank you Rhonda, both for the visit and lovely comments! Have a nice week. // paul

Skat A

Date: 11/30/2014 1:51:00 AM

PAUL, Congratulations with your awesome "Frozen In Crystalline" win. ~SKAT~

Paul Callus
Date: 11/30/2014 3:07:00 AM

Thank you Skat! Just read your collaboration...awesome! Take care...the both of you. /x/ paul

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/30/2014 12:17:00 AM

you really stirred my senses, paul.. a round of cheers on your fine win!..

Paul Callus
Date: 11/30/2014 2:50:00 AM

Hi Nette! Your cheers are much appreciated; thank you for stopping by with lovely comments. Have a nice Sunday. // paul

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 11/29/2014 10:22:00 PM

Superb write Paul ! Congrats on ur awesome winning write!

Paul Callus
Date: 11/30/2014 2:48:00 AM

So pleased you enjoyed it, Upma. Thank you; been some time since we both been on the same winners' list! glad to share this one with you! // paul

Frederic Parker

Date: 11/29/2014 6:40:00 PM

Congratulations Paul you captured it well

Paul Callus
Date: 11/30/2014 2:46:00 AM

Thank you Frederic; glad to see yours flying high, too. // paul

Sandra Haight

Date: 11/29/2014 6:02:00 PM

Hi Paul, love the message in your poem! Congratulations on your well-deserved win! Sandra

Paul Callus
Date: 11/29/2014 6:04:00 PM

Glad you enjoyed, Sandra! Thank you for the visit, comments and congrats. Have a nice weekend. // paul

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 11/29/2014 3:19:00 PM

Dropping back with my congratulations Paul. I knew this was a great one. ;-).

Paul Callus
Date: 11/29/2014 3:23:00 PM

Thank you for re-visiting, Brenda...and for the faith you showed in it from the start; glad to see your entry on the winners' list, too! // paul

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 11/29/2014 12:51:00 PM

beautiful vision Paul congrats on win hugs

Paul Callus
Date: 11/29/2014 3:11:00 PM

Hi Shadow! Thank you for visiting an d bringing lovely congrats with you! Nice for both of us to share places on the winners' list! // paul

Jan Allison

Date: 11/29/2014 12:13:00 PM

Dropping back with my congrats Paul:-) Hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus
Date: 11/29/2014 3:12:00 PM

Many thanks, Jan. Wish you a nice weekend. hugs // paul

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 11/29/2014 10:41:00 AM

I could not be happier with your top spot win. A great poet gets his well deserved acclaim. Congratulations on being so talented.

Paul Callus
Date: 11/29/2014 3:15:00 PM

Aww Maurice, thank you for your lovely comments...you are too kind! In our country we have a saying that goes: You need a wise man to recognize another...:) Cheers. // paul

Earl Schumacker

Date: 11/29/2014 8:53:00 AM

Hi Paul, Congratulations. Great win. Nice imagery. Have a great week end. Earl

Paul Callus
Date: 11/29/2014 3:17:00 PM

Thank you for the visit and lovely comments, Earl; glad you enjoyed. // paul

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/29/2014 8:40:00 AM

Way to go Paul.

Paul Callus
Date: 11/29/2014 3:19:00 PM

Thank you Richard; I liked yours a lot; expected to see it higher up the list. // paul

David Mohn

Date: 11/29/2014 8:33:00 AM

Back for big congrats Paul...still as gorgeous as the first time I layed eyes on her :)

Paul Callus
Date: 11/29/2014 3:22:00 PM

Thank you for re-visiting, David; glad to see your entry flying high, too! // paul

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/29/2014 6:44:00 AM

Congrats on your winning entry..There were some very creative works on the list..Very talented group of writers gathered that this soup pot..Thanks for dropping by with congrats..Sara

Paul Callus
Date: 11/29/2014 3:26:00 PM

Thank you Sara; as you say, there were many worthy entries, so being on this winning list is an achievement in itself! Have a nice weekend. /x/ paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 11/29/2014 6:12:00 AM

PAUL congratulations! your poem now is well justified.. :)!! i just love best your first line.. :)

Paul Callus
Date: 11/29/2014 3:29:00 PM

Thank you dear Olive_eloi!:) This result helps to heal my wounded ego!!! We warriors are never down for long, are we!!:) May you have a lovely weekend:) hugs // paul

Joseph May

Date: 11/29/2014 6:11:00 AM

Beautiful write Paul.. Congrats on your win

Paul Callus
Date: 11/29/2014 3:30:00 PM

Thank you Joseph; it was nice to see your entry flying at the top, too. // paul

Len Gasun

Date: 11/29/2014 1:38:00 AM

Wow! This is amazingly great my very dear friend Paul. So inspiring! My biggest congratulations on your well-deserved super win! Hugs n cheers! love lots, Leonora

Paul Callus
Date: 11/29/2014 3:41:00 PM

Wow! You rock dear Leonora! Thank you for the lovely reaction to my poem; so glad you enjoyed and found it inspiring! Always looking forward to your welcome visits:) hugs // paul

Kayod5 Kayode

Date: 11/29/2014 1:02:00 AM

Dropping back to congratulate you Paul, I am so happy that this beautiful Poem made it to the top .Congrats...huggs

Paul Callus
Date: 11/29/2014 3:08:00 PM

Thank you Kayod5; you were one of the first that had faith in it! In fact, I'm receiving a double doze of congrats from you :) hugs // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/29/2014 12:35:00 AM

I just love how well yours went along with the picture for it. Perfect in every way. BIG congrats, Paul.

Paul Callus
Date: 11/29/2014 3:04:00 PM

Hi Andrea! Thank you for the high placing you awarded my poem! It made my day! At first glance those shadows reminded me of frozen prison bars....then the rest evolved as the mind expanded on the initial idea...dreams released. Have a nice weekend. // paul

David Mohn

Date: 11/26/2014 1:03:00 PM

This is gorgeous Paul...good luck with this beauty

Paul Callus
Date: 11/26/2014 2:43:00 PM

Thank you David; your 'gorgeous' comment is much appreciated. // paul