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An Haiku' S Sunlit Feathers

O Butterfly! colour collage From butter to fly You coined your name Paired wings Your wings though fixed Adapt to wind It flaps to fly Into thin sky Pollen folk Stigma scented Fairy wings O Butterfly! From butter to fly You curved your name Flowering bouquet Rainbows mix 1st Place Win Kia Michael Neumann's butter flies and marshes mellow premiere contest 1ST Place Win BRIAN'S CHOICE W,any form,any theme 5/26/2020 https://youtu.be/Lo9c3-CZlno Link to watch on my YouTube channel

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V. Deepa

Date: 7/27/2020 7:16:00 AM

Hi Gideon brother, Beautiful blend of words describing butterfly.Your sheer muse brought a trophy win. Am happy for you :-) keep writing and keep inspiring:-)Hope your keeping well. Take care.Warmest regards~Deepa:-)

Gideon Idudje
Date: 7/30/2020 8:24:00 PM

Thanks a lot Deepa Keep safe.

Aditi Mishra

Date: 7/26/2020 11:43:00 AM

I am so happy to see the trophy next to your muse my friend. Your muse is really soothing and gorgeous. Congratulations on your top win Gideon. Blessings :)

Gideon Idudje
Date: 7/30/2020 8:25:00 PM

Aditi Am grateful thanks for your comments

P.M. Richter

Date: 7/17/2020 12:55:00 PM

Wow. That was beyond phenomenal!

Gideon Idudje
Date: 7/19/2020 3:32:00 PM

Interesting comments Richter

Brenda Chiri

Date: 7/16/2020 4:45:00 PM

This was amazing piece congrats on your #1 win!;)

Gideon Idudje
Date: 7/17/2020 12:23:00 PM

Nice to have you back on Poetry soup... Brenda Long time no see!! Welcome back Thanks for the comments God ...bless

John Watt

Date: 7/16/2020 12:08:00 PM

Gideon, it was wonderful to read of your ode to butterflies today. They are a wonder to behold, and inspiring to the beauty-loving eye. Well done, and congratulations on your #1 win ~ John

Gideon Idudje
Date: 7/16/2020 2:51:00 PM

Thanks John ...very grateful pleased having you around on poetry soup as a pal Thanks alot

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/16/2020 11:49:00 AM

Fairy wings O butterfly! Congratulations on your top win!

Gideon Idudje
Date: 7/16/2020 2:53:00 PM

Yah ...thanks Kim For your comments And for reading my poem.

Jeanne Mcgee

Date: 7/16/2020 7:32:00 AM

Nice write of butterflies...congrats on the top win.

Gideon Idudje
Date: 7/16/2020 7:50:00 AM

Wow! Thanks Jeanne kind words!

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 7/16/2020 4:42:00 AM

Congratulations on your special win in my contest. Your poem is most enjoyable and paints a beautiful picture to cherish. Kind regards, Kai

Gideon Idudje
Date: 7/16/2020 7:51:00 AM

Interesting Kia ..thanks a lot a...God bless Very please

Aditi Mishra

Date: 6/18/2020 5:27:00 AM

Your gorgeous words paint a beautiful picture Gideon. Congratulations on your win :)

Gideon Idudje
Date: 6/18/2020 10:45:00 AM

Thanks Aditi God bless

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 6/18/2020 4:09:00 AM

A very beautiful write, Gideon, with some stunning imagery - congrats on your multiple wins with this beauty!

Gideon Idudje
Date: 6/18/2020 4:45:00 AM

Bless You From a grateful heart

Tom Cunningham

Date: 6/18/2020 3:54:00 AM

I just love to see them Flutter around the garden in summer time, Congratulations on your win. Tom

Gideon Idudje
Date: 6/18/2020 4:46:00 AM

Thanks to You Appreciation Goes to Tom.

Susan Ashley

Date: 6/17/2020 8:43:00 PM

Gideon, this is such a glorious celebration of thought and imagery, rhythm and rhymes exalting the beauty of "pollen folk" (love that!).. your words dance upon the page with the flitting lightness of a butterfly. Simply stunning. Congratulations on your wonderful win in Chantelle's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Gideon Idudje
Date: 6/18/2020 1:09:00 AM

Thanks a lot Susan Grateful heart goes to you

Amelia Harrell

Date: 5/27/2020 12:02:00 AM

A vivid description of a beautiful butterfly :D

Gideon Idudje
Date: 5/27/2020 5:11:00 AM

Thanks