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From Bliss To Hell -Edited

(I just edited this to include the word "rhyme" within the poem, if that was needed) 378 days of bliss; then for no rhyme or reason came 176 of living hell. Those last days have shown me that I didn’t know my lover very well. To think we made it last more than a year is a surprise. Now I see him coming and I want to close my eyes! Whatever did I find attractrive in that man’s smug face? How could my adored have taken such a fall from grace? 26 times since 2010 I saw a shrink; life became so grim. All 26 times were just from those last several months with HIM. This Cinder Girl has had it. In hell she’d rather burn than let that guy who burned her once ever again RETURN! Written last week for Funom Makama's Views For Poems Poetry Contest AT that time, my number of views for Cinder Girl was at 378,176 (used in line 1) The date it was first posted at Soup was 2/6/2010 (used in line 7) Cinder Girl AND this poem are both rhymed poems.

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Date: 7/26/2020 12:05:00 PM
Ah! Loved your creativity in this one Andrea. The magnificence of your mentioned poem is carried in this one as well. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 7/18/2020 11:37:00 PM
Hello Andrea ... so well written and sad to read how the once joy turned to a deep hurt - thanks Andrea - Lindsay
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 7/19/2020 4:09:00 PM
hope you know this was all make believe!!
Date: 7/18/2020 4:35:00 PM
A top win! Great job my friend! Nicely penned.
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Date: 7/17/2020 8:33:00 PM
For some reason this contest was very confusing to me. So, I didn't even try to think of what to come up with in which I do now with so many others. Congratulations on you win.
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Date: 7/17/2020 7:37:00 PM
Hello, Andrea. I'm pleased to share this honor with you. My number of views is a raindrop in a storm compared to yours. Congratulations!
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Date: 7/17/2020 3:55:00 PM
Wow Andrea, you were able to use your highest rated poem for this contest. Congratulations on your top win. That is quite a high number of views for your magnificent creation! Blessings xxoo
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Date: 7/17/2020 11:07:00 AM
Great to see this one at the top, Andrea. iI noticed you carried over the 'being burned' theme. Congrats!
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Date: 7/17/2020 8:03:00 AM
Congrats on your top win, Andrea. A fun read.
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Date: 7/17/2020 5:44:00 AM
Thank you so much for this great entry, your high placement is well deserved. A big congratulations.
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Date: 7/16/2020 6:01:00 PM
Very well done and true to life in many instances. Great job. God Bless, JB
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Date: 7/16/2020 5:57:00 PM
Very nice!
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Date: 7/16/2020 3:08:00 PM
Amazing & A Fave. SM.
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Date: 7/16/2020 1:52:00 PM
Isn't it amazing how different one's Ex appears sans rosey glasses? Aloha! Rico
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Date: 7/16/2020 8:44:00 AM
....and back again......and with statistical documentation....
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Date: 7/15/2020 8:41:00 PM
I find the use of precise statistics so interesting in a 'poem!' In addition to your 'Andaree,' you have perhaps spawned the first stage of the 'Scientific Method of Poesy!' Three Cheers, Andrea! Smiles, Gershon
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Date: 7/15/2020 8:28:00 PM
OMG I love this. That was SO fun to read. A fave ;))))) xomo! ...good luck in the contest!
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