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Friendship

Some friends will forget you as a ghost in lost time Some friends will walk past you and never look by This is a reality life's not a cartoon but if you get lonely there's always the moon The friends who are loyal count few fingertips the others are only sad words on the lips But if you get lonely there's always a star which reaches for your heart wherever you are.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 3/11/2014 3:21:00 PM
Beautiful dear friend... " But if you get lonely there's always a star which reaches for your heart wherever you are. " touched my soul... Rill knows what is our pain...Trees understand what is our wishes ...Mothers feel who are we....Thanks with love and respect...
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Date: 2/10/2013 9:38:00 AM
Sadness can sometimes lend a beautiful quality to poetry. Very nice indeed. I hope you get some more loyal friends. Thanks for your very encouraging comments.
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Date: 4/12/2012 5:58:00 PM
Very nice, Charma, ultimately it's only this star that will be by u, jag
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 4/13/2012 3:55:00 PM
Yes Jag so true
Date: 4/12/2012 9:58:00 AM
Friends come and friends go.. There are those that remain loyal for all eternity.. I have a select few that I trust with my life.. Well done my friend.. Keep them coming, I have enjoyed reading your work this morning as always....:JP]
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 4/12/2012 10:59:00 AM
thanks so much Jared and im going to make time and read your poetry too.. Keep them comin :)
Date: 4/12/2012 6:48:00 AM
Love this dear poetess.
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 4/12/2012 10:58:00 AM
thanks so much Chitta
Date: 4/12/2012 12:11:00 AM
:) very lovely Charma...and so true...wise you are my friend...big huggs,love deb
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 4/12/2012 10:58:00 AM
tnks for reading Deborah :)much appreciated

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