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Freedom Flight

He stood shivering in the biting cold Shreds of dirty, flimsy clothes clung to his frame All around his fellow skeletons huddled Waiting for the inevitable walk to that sinister place His wait had been longer than most He had been subjected to terrible cruelty He had seen all of his friends and family go Yet in his mind he had remained free His physical torment seemed detached when lost in his memories His little girl chasing her puppy in the bright sunshine Friends and relatives around the festive table laughing, chatting, eating Walking hand-in-hand with his beloved around the moonlight lake But the freezing wind jolted him back to the hellish reality He looked towards the barbed-wire fence which bounded his world There sat on the top wire was a little bird It sang the sweetest of tunes seemingly just for him It looked at him as it sang with such innocence And then with a flutter of its tiny wings It swooped towards him, turned and glided back over the fence It pecked at the hard earth before flying into the woods beyond He knew it was his time Into that building he trudged But he had a strange sense of elation Closing his eyes at last he was free The morning light shone brightly The little bird was at his side It guided him on as they soared through the sky With the shackles of hell cast aside freedom now prevailed He and the little bird would never go back to that place again ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ To commemorate the liberation of Auschwitz on 27 January 1945. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ 2nd place in 'Flight Two' Poetry Premiere Contest, Sponsor Chantelle Anne Cooke

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Date: 6/25/2022 1:09:00 AM
Beautiful narration of a rather serious event and emotions. Congratulations!
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Simon Rogerson
Date: 6/25/2022 9:32:00 AM
Thanks Christuraj. I feel it is important to write about such serious events so people remember.
Date: 6/24/2022 5:41:00 PM
Dear Simon, such a brilliant title crowns this harrowing poem. The haunting imagery, desperate emotions and spiritual symbolism all combine to create an intimate portrait of an Auschwitz prisoner. A heartrending piece that reaches in with a potent ache to the depths of my heart. The freedom gained in your last line is an impactful grand finale. Congratulations for your excellent in Chantelle's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Simon Rogerson
Date: 6/25/2022 9:29:00 AM
Dear Susan, Many thanks for your kind words. I wanted to write a commemorative poem having been to Auschwitz as well as holocaust museums in Warsaw and Jerusalem. I am so pleased you found my poem fitting. Simon
Date: 6/24/2022 11:54:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A "Creative" write. Have a great/blessed~~ day/weekend writing away.........................
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Simon Rogerson
Date: 6/25/2022 9:29:00 AM
Thanks Paula
Date: 6/18/2020 7:00:00 AM
Sure, freedom is needed in every aspect of our lives. You really brought the picture of the persona and his feelings. Keep it up
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Date: 1/27/2020 1:58:00 AM
Well done...You described the cross over...
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