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'free Verse On Love' - True Loves Ways

TRUE LOVES WAYS ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ My Dearest Darling my love for you is endless Each night we transcend to another plain of rapture a private plain where inhibitions are forbidden We explore the very depths of true love, sounds no other hear. The moon now waking dawn, we hold each others head, We touch lips, we kiss, we whisper words with our eyes only we can hear, true love for us will always be so special. You remember when I took your hand, that night We planned a life for us, when every smile, every touch Would mean 'I love you'. Another night I took your hand, thinking I've got this planned Will you, before I could say the magic words she said, "Yes" and "will you"? She took me by the hand, setting me on fire, I looked into her eyes, it was dawn, another night of passion. This is it, I'll ask her now, and without hesitation, I whispered in her ear, "Will you marry me" she fainted All that day we kissed each other back to life and now were man and wife ELATED! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
2/24/18 'Free Verse on Love' Contest, sponsored by Laura Loo

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Date: 3/6/2018 10:12:00 PM
Very romantic, a most enjoyable read, Mick. Congrats on your most deserving win.
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Mick Talbot
Date: 6/22/2018 2:49:00 AM
Missed this one, thank you Line appreciated, Mick
Date: 2/27/2018 1:11:00 AM
Mick, your romantic poem gave me chills! This kind of breathless love is what every couple seeks. Lovely! Congratulations on your wonderful win! : )
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Mick Talbot
Date: 2/27/2018 6:40:00 PM
Connie, Thank you on both counts, appreciated... Mick
Date: 2/26/2018 10:54:00 AM
Congratulations Mick. Tom
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Mick Talbot
Date: 2/26/2018 2:18:00 PM
Cheers Tom, appreciated... Mick
Date: 2/26/2018 5:38:00 AM
"plain of rapture" how sensual and romantic dear poet, beautifully expressed!thank you and congrats : )-luloo
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Mick Talbot
Date: 2/26/2018 2:18:00 PM
Hi Luloo, Thank you for your kind words and my placement... Mick ;-)
Date: 2/24/2018 2:26:00 PM
Me thinks me smells a winner ;)
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Mick Talbot
Date: 2/24/2018 3:46:00 PM
Thanks Maureen, Fingers crossed :-)
Date: 2/24/2018 12:40:00 PM
Hello Mick, this is a beutifully written romantic poem. Have a nice day my friend.
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Mick Talbot
Date: 2/24/2018 3:47:00 PM
Hi Darlene, Hoping so, many thanks, Mick

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