Fragile Heart

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Foolish me Rejected, set free Again, lured back Grieved by what lacks In this romance Love’s a chancy dance Equality’s missing Healing’s not found in kissing Ever sinking lower Aware more hurt’s in store Realizing I’m so foolish, too weak To pursue the change I should seek February 13, 2021 Contest Title: My Foolish Heart Sponsor: Craig Cornish received NA in Brian Strand's all yours Feb 14 contest

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Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 2/28/2021 7:33:00 AM

Janice, You write very well my friend,and you are very versatile in your topics you use. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/13/2021 11:53:00 AM

- Love hurts ... woow ... very well done, Janice :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Janice Canerdy
Date: 2/13/2021 5:31:00 PM

Thanks so much, Anne-Lise. Janice

Constance La France

Date: 2/13/2021 8:26:00 AM

Janice, you have penned an excellent Acrostic poem for Craig's Foolish Heart contest, I like it very much and hope to see it on the winning list _Constance

Janice Canerdy
Date: 2/13/2021 8:31:00 AM

Constance, thanks a million! Janice