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Fragile Flames

She was his muse so beautiful, a true angel on earth 'til she revealed to him her many scars Disquiet at first filled with concern then slowly proceeded to unstitch every one of her wounds as if they were buttons of an old blouse...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 10/14/2014 7:01:00 AM
this is touching beautifully penned love how you drew this piece
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Date: 6/18/2014 6:14:00 AM
Loving the metaphors here Madelin..hugs Tim
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Madelin Barton
Date: 6/18/2014 8:55:00 PM
Thanks Tim putting the finishing touches on my first book and found some old stuff I considered worth sharing hence Fragile flames... Hugs Maddie

Book: Shattered Sighs