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Forgiven 21

A conscience; telling me to walk not; But, temptation over powered. Not listening to my mind, sin took its course again. Father, "FORGIVE me, for this is the twenty-first time with her." Pace, G 04-25-2012

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Danielle Dixon

Date: 3/13/2014 1:45:00 PM

Nice. Makes me want to hear the rest of the story.

Debbie Duncan

Date: 10/18/2013 12:51:00 AM

nicely done ;}

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/8/2012 9:55:00 PM

if it sounds like fun, why don't you join,,, what????? you can't produce a nice wet kissing poem for my contest.... never mind you don't seem like the challenging kind of man... you only write for you,,,,,xox~ pd

Pace Ink-U-Script
Date: 8/18/2012 9:46:00 PM

Lmao!!

Doreen Wright

Date: 7/30/2012 3:24:00 PM

Alright now...no 22nd time lol!! JK! I enjoyed your nonet!! I can dig it!

Pace Ink-U-Script
Date: 8/18/2012 9:45:00 PM

Doreen, thank you!!! Lmao!!

Jennifer Spase

Date: 7/18/2012 6:07:00 AM

A powerful habit to break is the intense connection with the wrong person. You opened my eyes with a good laugh.

Pace Ink-U-Script
Date: 8/18/2012 9:43:00 PM

Lol..thanks Jennifer!! :)

Diane Christian

Date: 6/4/2012 6:21:00 AM

aww lovley verse, I know the bible says we should forgive not 77 times but 77 times 7 and ekep multiplying it, wellw ritten and thanks for your kind comments. God bless you from diane

Pace Ink-U-Script
Date: 6/4/2012 7:14:00 AM

Thank you so kindly Diane!!! Love your comment!!

Carma Sanderson

Date: 6/1/2012 11:55:00 PM

love the passion in your pen, amongst all else.... Carma

Pace Ink-U-Script
Date: 6/2/2012 12:30:00 AM

Thank you as I love your passion in your work as well Carma!!

Bl Devnath

Date: 5/6/2012 10:23:00 AM

Prayer is only way to recover, nice truth, Loved always, bl

Pace Ink-U-Script
Date: 6/2/2012 12:30:00 AM

Sir..sorry!!

Pace Ink-U-Script
Date: 5/6/2012 9:42:00 PM

Thank you madam always!!!

Amy Green

Date: 5/6/2012 8:28:00 AM

Standing ovation!

Pace Ink-U-Script
Date: 5/6/2012 8:49:00 AM

Thank you maam for stopping by!

Gianna Swayne

Date: 5/3/2012 9:40:00 PM

LOL! U know this was great... I really enjoy ur work. I got a good smile from this one.. I really liked it's form as well.

Pace Ink-U-Script
Date: 5/4/2012 4:17:00 AM

Lol...yeah trying to be different..all smiles

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/1/2012 6:04:00 PM

Got a chuckle..Sara

Pace Ink-U-Script
Date: 5/1/2012 10:04:00 PM

Lol...cute

Nancy Jones

Date: 4/26/2012 5:37:00 PM

Well, at least you're counting...

Pace Ink-U-Script
Date: 4/30/2012 9:36:00 AM

Lol!! I just needed a two syllable number so I used twenty-one..lol Only to make a point that no matter how many times you fall its not too late to get back up.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/26/2012 3:03:00 PM

I enjoyed this nonet. Hmmm, maybe it's time for an engagement ring!!! (from my christian point of view, I think you really like her a lot!)

Pace Ink-U-Script
Date: 4/26/2012 3:16:00 PM

Lol..I can't even reply to your comment from falling on the floor laughing. I was just trying to speak the mind of other guys who may have felt like this once before. I'm not ready for marrage just yet. smiles..hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/26/2012 1:04:00 PM

Good my friend,( dont miss my last one too).Smile !!!! - oxox Anne-Lise

Pace Ink-U-Script
Date: 4/26/2012 3:13:00 PM

I won't sweetheart!!! Thank you for stopping by. hugs smile

Ronny Madonsela

Date: 4/26/2012 10:44:00 AM

a suspense at the end i like.

Pace Ink-U-Script
Date: 4/26/2012 12:26:00 PM

Thank you for stopping by and sharing!!

Deborah Burch

Date: 4/25/2012 9:00:00 PM

LOL...how do you keep up with the "pace" G ;) Cool write...yeah, I got to agree with the title, though...after 21x...lol clever...big hugs, hun, love deb

Pace Ink-U-Script
Date: 4/26/2012 2:38:00 AM

Lol...too funny!!! Hugs and love...thank you for sharing with me.

Joseph May

Date: 4/25/2012 6:39:00 PM

very nice nonet G...thanks for sharing

Pace Ink-U-Script
Date: 4/26/2012 2:36:00 AM

Thank you sir..a pleasure seeing you!!